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Childhood Dream - Tanka

from the alleyway two monarch butterflies racing to and fro across the backdrop of an azure sky reaching skyward climbing the rickety fence I drift to dream lost in a scarlet breeze to rest upon a white rose

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Date: 7/21/2018 8:08:00 AM
Hello Rick Parise, you paint a beautiful picture with your words. Have a nice weekend. my friend.
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Date: 7/19/2018 10:22:00 AM
Absolutely breathtaking in its deep beauty Rick.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/19/2018 8:33:00 AM
Rick, nature can surely lull us into a dream state where self discovery often takes place!
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Date: 7/18/2018 4:05:00 PM
Lovely Rick...
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