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Big flood, loo blocked I’m the good twin - Misunderstood! Bauk Than - Than Bauk Poetry Contest Sponsored by Charles Messina Checked with how many syllables 12/05/20

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/17/2021 5:14:00 AM

LOL! It’s a whodunnit! Don’t tell me! Leave it to mystery! Congratulations! Love this!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/19/2021 3:41:00 PM

I would never tell lol:-) hugs jan xx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/16/2021 6:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. So cute the way you did the "Big flood" and "good twin." Enjoy your win/day with blessings..................

Jan Allison
Date: 2/19/2021 3:40:00 PM

Thanks Paula:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina

Date: 2/15/2021 9:33:00 PM

Love this, Jan. Congrats on your win! Hugs // Charlie

Jan Allison
Date: 2/19/2021 3:40:00 PM

Thanks for the contest Charlie:-) we had just come out of lockdown when i wrote this:-) hugs jan xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/13/2020 4:51:00 PM

Oh, yes! Well done!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/19/2021 3:40:00 PM

thanks for the comment Caren so sorry i have missed replying sooner:-( hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/8/2020 10:44:00 AM

Yikes, it sounds like my "loo"! Great Than Bauk, Jan. Wishing you success in the contest! Hugs, carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 2/19/2021 3:39:00 PM

thanks for the comment Carolyn so sorry i have missed replying sooner:-( hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/7/2020 1:56:00 PM

haha. I had to think a second!!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/19/2021 3:39:00 PM

thanks for the comment Andrea so sorry i have missed replying sooner:-( hugs Jan xx

Mark Koplin

Date: 12/7/2020 7:58:00 AM

no skipping to that loo. Good job!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/19/2021 3:39:00 PM

Lol, thanks for the comment Mark so sorry i have missed replying sooner:-( hugs Jan xx

Peter Dome

Date: 12/6/2020 11:23:00 AM

Very clever. Short and sweet Hope you won. Take caree. well done.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/19/2021 3:38:00 PM

thanks for the comment Peter so sorry i have missed replying sooner:-( hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 12/6/2020 10:32:00 AM

Clever! There are no corners in your mind! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 2/19/2021 3:38:00 PM

I dont think I have brain at times lol:-) xx

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 12/6/2020 7:24:00 AM

Got the Loo blocked once, and ya it kinda looked liked twins. Good luck in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/19/2021 3:38:00 PM

lol, thanks for the comment Jerry so sorry i have missed replying sooner:-( hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/6/2020 3:29:00 AM

I see you got busy and wrote the new form for the new contest. Way to go. You did really good with this one or are you the bad twin and did real bad with this one? Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 2/19/2021 3:37:00 PM

thanks for the comment Sara so sorry i have missed replying sooner:-( hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/6/2020 12:48:00 AM

My cousin has twin boys, thankfully grown up now and one has grown a beard, I was always getting them mixed up. Good luck Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 2/19/2021 3:36:00 PM

thanks for the comment Tom so sorry i have missed replying sooner:-( hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/6/2020 3:30:00 AM

Tom, Now if the other one doesn't grow a beard then you will have it made. Sara

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/5/2020 8:30:00 PM

So cute. Love this. God bless you sweet lady

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2020 2:06:00 PM

Thanks regina:-) hugs jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/5/2020 5:37:00 PM

When in doubt, confuse them, I always say. lol. G.L. in the contest, Jan. :) gw

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2020 2:05:00 PM

deffo GW lol:-) hugs jan xx

John Watt

Date: 12/5/2020 4:46:00 PM

Your funny bone strikes again, good twin! Loved it, best wishes with Charlie. Hugs ~ John

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2020 2:05:00 PM

I can just imagine the confusion twins could cause lol:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/5/2020 3:59:00 PM

Lol! Jan, This is a good entry for the contest. This is hilarious! Your sense of humor is one of a kind. Best wishes in the contest. Have a good evening:-)Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2020 2:05:00 PM

Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx