Child of the Universe

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Alone, I beheld the universe in glory, Hearing people, sharing stories. Under the umbrella of heaven’s gate. Delectable, love whispers, of their fate. The wind then hummed with a loud cry. With no hand for comfort, I wondered why. Thunder deafened us with great fright. All turned up our collars, seeking warm, shelter. In that wondrous.yet fearful night, helter-skelter! 4/18/2023

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/25/2023 3:36:00 PM

Hello Panagiota, Panagiota this is a beautiful poem. I do like it. The universe is beautiful. When looking at the sky seeing the visions of the moon and the stars Is a joy to see. Hugs. /Darlene\ xxx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/25/2023 3:57:00 PM

Hi..Darlene thank you for commentating!! You know, there is a song like this that plugs you are a trial of the universe, no less than the moon and the stars. So while we love to look at the stars in the moon, we have a remember that we are just as beautiful as they are. How does that sound?. Glad you liked this poem, I know you appreciate nature in all is dorms, Pangie xxx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/25/2023 3:49:00 PM

Panagiota, i am making this poem my fav. Hugs /Darlene\xxx

Stephan McBride

Date: 4/18/2023 11:04:00 AM

Lovely rhyming poem, thanks for sharing your amazing gift with us all,. : )

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/18/2023 11:52:00 AM

Oh, Stephan! You are big of heart to comment on my humble poem. Bless you this day and always! +++ Panagiota