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Child In a Quiver

Catholic education taught me all my Ps and Qs when nuns and priests coached a child's reluctant view, in a quandary and a quiver to kneel up straight and perfectly perpendicular, amidst the gold and platinum rich cathedrals churches of quicksand-like quag pews medieval, shaped for the prostrating prayerful penitent awaiting an offenders penance and its remnants, in somber quiet of quaint old confessional tombs while incense burns a bitter scented perfume , quintessentially questioning everything qued perpetuating a quay to conclude when to sink or swim in perplexing quirky quotes of pseudo pallid pantomimes of forgiveness and hope, when tranquil poise in prayer extolls the loss of childhood innocence repaired. Using up those Ps and Qs with an added one or two. Penance Poise Perfume Platinum Quay Quiver Quandary Quaint for the sponsor of contest Mind Your Ps and Qs Michelle Faulkner 2/19/21

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Date: 3/8/2021 6:14:00 AM
Lovely write DM. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 3/7/2021 7:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Guess you learned your Ps and Qs when you were young. A wonderful write. Enjoy your day with blessings........................
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Date: 3/6/2021 4:17:00 PM
I know from friends how strict the catholic upbringing can be, I especially like the use of alliteration in ' when to sink or swim in perplexing quirky quotes of pseudo pallid pantomimes of forgiveness and hope' many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/6/2021 9:19:00 AM
I am not Catholic but can appreciate the experience you described here, you have painted a rich vivid picture, especially like 'gold and platinum rich cathedrals' and 'incense burns a bitter scented perfume' - congratulations and thanks for entering my contest!
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