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Chiku Cheer

Change can look strange Strange as the range Range you arrange Choice flings sure voice Voice that firms poise Poise survives noise Cheer funds poise here Here streams all years Years far and near Leon Enriquez 04 October 2014 Singapore

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2014 12:19:00 PM

I never saw a triolet with short lines before. Inventive!

Leon Enriquez
Date: 10/5/2014 11:55:00 PM

Dear Andrea: Thank you. Glad you like this freshly minted poem in a new style. If you read it out loud, you will notice that the last word in each line becomes the first word in the next line. Also, I am experimenting with 2 versions -- 1st in free verse, and the 2nd with a rhyme scheme. All my best then, Leon.