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Chiclana De La Frontera

Cool throngs of stars formed one vast arm to sweep the coal-black clockface of the sky. To watch it was to reel beneath the slow, imperious creep of the never-ending circle. One could reach out, it seemed, and almost touch the tart cicada song which throbbed in soft insistent insect waves with formlessness of drizzle, mass of stone. But more than these, the patient ancients blazed blackness from their gnarled necrotic trunks, more ominously sensed than seen, and bled into the dark those summer suns they'd drunk, as tired as immortality, as dense as death. We hope on heartbeats, count on slivers of light, but hear within our blood the rhythm of night.

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Date: 4/1/2017 12:08:00 PM
I miss the cicadas... Many people think they are crickets. While In my grandfather's grip, I used to sit watch in the early hours how they crawled out of the ground, all green and vulnerable, looking for a higher place to dry. After they did and flew away like giant flies, I collected the husks. What does this have to do with your poem? Nothing, but it triggered a gentle memory, and I don't have many :) (continued)
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Michael Coy
Date: 4/1/2017 12:55:00 PM
Your reactions are always perfect. You "get" what I'm trying to do. It's magnificent!
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Darren White
Date: 4/1/2017 12:11:00 PM
But it's that atmosphere you captured here so well. That atmosphere that presses on you incessantly, especially in summer. I am from Egypt, bur never got used to that heat, it suffocated me and made me claustrophobic, with an almost wish to run from it, but where to?

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