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Chickens, Bananas, and Coconuts

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What a lovely bunch! Or is that bananas? I think the term is cluster. But isn’t that chickens? No, that’s a peep, as in, don’t make one. If I don’t make a peep, will I become a Silent One? If I Speak(s) Volumes will I cluck like a cluster of chickens? If I do, will I be thought crazy as a hand of bananas? If I am an Unseeking Seeker, will I lose my chickens? Or is that marbles? I have to choose just one. Peep of chickens, cluster of coconuts, or hand of bananas? Forget the chickens and bananas, make a poem with the other one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 10/30/2023 11:17:00 AM
Clever and fun use of unique poet names!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/30/2023 1:14:00 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting to this silly, whimsical poem Karen. :)
Date: 10/22/2023 9:04:00 AM
Haha! Dear Linda, I adore this cleverly composed poem! Adorable silliness with a wonderful sprinkling of distinct poets for added dimension and word play. Lots of giggles here! Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/22/2023 12:15:00 PM
Thank you dear, sweet Susan. You are always os positive and encouraging - thank you for being you! :)
Date: 10/19/2023 10:26:00 PM
Well I finally got to read this masterpiece LAF. Its brilliant. What you call "silliness" is a breath of fresh air ! Love it & thanks for including me in the fun !
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/20/2023 11:53:00 AM
Not everyone likes "silly" my dear friend. But a breath of fresh air is refreshing for me! Many thanks! And for permission as well. I learned my lesson on this one. Still, I smiled while writing it. :)
Date: 10/17/2023 1:17:00 AM
I love everything here!... :) Cliff
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/17/2023 7:31:00 AM
Heya Cliff. A little silliness makes one smile. Thanks for dropping in. :)
Date: 10/12/2023 10:05:00 PM
A very humorous and clever combination of poets' names, honoring people, never bringing any hurt. Enjoyed much, Linda !
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/13/2023 7:39:00 AM
Hi Valsa. Thanks for the nice comment. No intentional harm from my pen. :) Life is short. Smile and be happy! :)
Date: 10/12/2023 7:30:00 PM
Good, clean fun and funny, methinks. You've lived up to your initials, LAF. ~ Keep smiling, gw
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/13/2023 7:38:00 AM
Many thanks gw. You're the best! I'm happy you got a smile or two from my silliness. :)
Date: 10/12/2023 7:11:00 PM
A witty write, Linda! I can't use my name as a PS tag as yours, since growing up in the States with a last name like 'Kekaula' (kay-COW-la) and winning 'Golden Glove' for our small town dad who taught us--few daring black-eyed boys ended it, but I still won't hit girls who went Scott-Free! Enjoyed your light-humored massacre! Aloha, William Kekaula (lucky LADY)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/13/2023 7:37:00 AM
LOL William. I see why you may not want to use it as a tag. :)) So nice to see you here. Your visits are always pleasing and warming with your sweet comments. Have a fine weekend my friend. :)
Date: 10/12/2023 2:58:00 PM
hilarious creation, Linda. You made me laugh...and I certainly needed a chuckle today. Nicely done, Sara
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/12/2023 6:44:00 PM
Hi Sara. I'm glad I brought a laugh your way! Many thanks dear friend. :)
Date: 10/12/2023 8:36:00 AM
Hahaha! Enjoyed!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/12/2023 9:34:00 AM
Hello my friend. :) Thank you twice. ;)
Date: 10/12/2023 7:49:00 AM
Clever little name-drop poem :)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/12/2023 8:17:00 AM
Very nice to see you Christopher! Thanks for the read and kind comment. :)

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