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Cherrywood Burning

Can you feel it? The crunch beneath our feet as we stroll along this path leading home! Hear it? 'Tis the leaves from the trees all dried and withered, tired just hanging around, fallen down! See them? Oh my! Do you smell it? C'mon, we're almost there! Cherrywood burning, cinnamon! Run, run! Mama! Give me a hug! Oh God, that feels so good! This is what I have been missing! Autumn!

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Skat A

Date: 10/29/2015 9:10:00 PM

Adele, Congratulations on your "Autumn Stroll win." Love SKAT

Adele Kaye
Date: 10/29/2015 9:22:00 PM

Thanks, SKAT! Pam aka Adele Kaye :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 10/29/2015 1:30:00 PM

I've never seen cinquain written like this but I like it! It really stands out! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Adele Kaye
Date: 10/29/2015 3:40:00 PM

Kim, thank you so much for taking time to read and comment on my poem! I truly appreciate it! Pam aka Adele Kaye :)

James Inman

Date: 10/27/2015 10:08:00 AM

Really enjoyed the use of questions to involve the reader. Made your poem very personal, Adele. You have a very casual matter of fact warm tone in this. Very nice.

Adele Kaye
Date: 10/27/2015 10:18:00 AM

James, thank you for the read and for your generous comments. I truly appreciate your time! Pam aka Adele Kaye :)

Eve Roper

Date: 10/26/2015 10:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Thank you for your participation in my contest.

Adele Kaye
Date: 10/27/2015 12:53:00 AM

Thank you so very much! What a nice surprise! And thank you for hosting the challenge! Pam aka Adele Kaye :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/24/2015 6:00:00 PM

Such delightful vivid imagery Adele:-) Hugs jan xx

Adele Kaye
Date: 10/24/2015 6:09:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading and commenting on my poem! I truly appreciate it! Pam aka Adele Kaye :)