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I purchased some 'cherry lips' from an old fashioned sweet shop at home .. the sweets  have a strange  taste rather like a very cheap scent and it was great to reminisce eating them again after many years and I also purchased some 'floral gums' which were also scented... I wonder if any Brits remember them from their childhood.

Her scent is so alluring as she hits on a guy in a bar. Cherry ripe kisses so adoring - with his cash she could go far. Scarlet talons now are clawing at his back as they tumble into bed. But when he takes her stockings off... he discovers she's a he instead! 30th October 2016

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Date: 11/4/2016 9:01:00 AM
Oopsie! Hey babe take a walk on the wild side ;) Ha, made me laugh out loud. Reminded me of Amy Winehouse lyrics. "With a pickup that puts you to shame And Cherry is her name" :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/4/2016 3:04:00 PM
lol thanks Paloma - its based on the song Lola lol oh Amy Winehouse what an incredible talent and such a sad end to her life:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/31/2016 11:53:00 PM
o noooo! Made me spill my coffee, well done great read!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/1/2016 12:40:00 PM
Hope the laptop didn't get a deluge James:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/31/2016 1:05:00 PM
- Sweet and soft kisses .... what surprise ... not easy to tell the difference ... before it's too late :)))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/31/2016 4:19:00 PM
Lol Anne-lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/31/2016 8:39:00 AM
Never trust a woman whose lips and nails are painted the color of blood. This is such a typically funny ending for a "Jan" write. ;-)
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Date: 10/31/2016 12:42:00 PM
I don't think I have ever worn red lipstick and as for my nails lol they get a coat of clear once in a blue moon I tend to do mum's not fuss over mine:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/30/2016 6:08:00 PM
hahaha. Cherry cola and you got LOLA!!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/30/2016 6:12:00 PM
I remember Darren wrote a poem about a 'lola' and of course our first meeting on the Isle of man poem I was once Stan lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/30/2016 5:19:00 PM
ha! i like where your mind went with this one, jan! very funny...
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/30/2016 5:31:00 PM
I worry about my muse lol I wrote this about 10 days ago and mailed it to myself so I could post it when I was away:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/30/2016 4:25:00 PM
Surprised by cherry lips//attached to hairy hips//quickly walked//after shocked//Now no kiss unless date strips. Yet anuther fine Janchuckler! huggerets! ~j
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/30/2016 4:33:00 PM
ha ha ha John a great response:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/30/2016 3:53:00 PM
Oh my, he won't be sharing that story with his buddies.
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Date: 10/30/2016 4:14:00 PM
ha ha ha for me it is written from imagination but I guess it does happen !:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/30/2016 3:51:00 PM
OH DEAR!!! Poor guy! Good one, Jan. ;)
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Date: 10/30/2016 4:13:00 PM
:-) Eileen I have met Charma and Adrian and Christina and Paul and family and now Victor and his wife:-):-) I can't stop smiling :-):-):-):-):-):-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/30/2016 3:13:00 PM
Not a pleasant surprise ...lol...we had wax lips but yours kind of look like the swedish fish candy we had
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Date: 10/30/2016 3:16:00 PM
The cherry lips sweets in the jar are a crescent shape - the jelly lips I found to go with the poem lol:-) If you have never tasted cherry lips they have a soapy type scent to them it's difficult to describe lol - once tasted never forgotten:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/30/2016 2:38:00 PM
That's one darn thing He wouldn't ever want to discover...poor guy..haha..lol: :)..:)..Got me laughing on my own : )..I remember those cherry lips sweets .: )
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/1/2016 4:45:00 PM
: )..Yes we have those cherry lips with a cheap scent..lol :) ..and even yellow bananas you buy by thr grams: )
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/30/2016 2:49:00 PM
Oh did they have them in Malta Charma lol - if someone hasn't tasted them it is difficult to explain the cheap scent they have. I wrote the poem before we came away and e mailed it to myself so I could post it lol:-) hugs to all:-) Jan xx