Cherry Bomb

Cherry Bomb

gross and red
deflowering natures way
cherry blossom pop  

~*~

Have yourself a Haiku Contest 
:) SKAT :)

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/14/2016 3:26:00 PM

A very good haiku, Skat. You got mad poetic skills for real. I can learn a lot from you and the other talented poetesses/poets here at PSoup. Now let me go read another one of your fine poems. Love and peace to you, dear.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2016 3:38:00 PM

Another cherry pops! Revisiting the cherry bomb haiku. Have a great day, Skat.

Robyn Campbell

Date: 12/30/2015 6:51:00 PM

Fantastic comparison. You write so well, my friend. I fear I will never be as good as you. I will try, though. XOXOXO

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 6/10/2015 3:35:00 AM

Congrats skat lovely poetess. This is the bomb. Makes me tink of exploding flowers and virgins and puberty in girls and what not. Do tel me what its about. Sublime and goes pop! Great haiku.

Len Gasun

Date: 5/29/2015 7:10:00 AM

My warmest congratulations on your win my dearest poet sis and friend, Skat! Biggest hugs and cheers! Stopping by to thank you once again for your warm congratulatory comments on mine, your lovely visit encouraging comments and thoughtfulness. May God bless you and your loved ones always! love lots, Leonora

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/29/2015 12:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your well-deserved win! I enjoyed this clever excellent haiku! Pandita

Edward Ebbs

Date: 5/27/2015 7:26:00 AM

Speachless, LOL, congrats :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/25/2015 11:37:00 PM

Congrats SKAT!

Skat A

Date: 5/25/2015 2:30:00 PM

Thanks for the win, Lyric Man... sk

Tim Smith

Date: 5/25/2015 10:40:00 AM

This idea's the bomb...congrats Skat

Jan Allison

Date: 5/25/2015 9:36:00 AM

clever haiku made me giggle - congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx

Singh Ram Krishna

Date: 7/8/2014 1:47:00 AM

This has an aha moment! R K

James Fraser

Date: 6/8/2014 11:23:00 AM

Great Haiku SKAT, sure gets the imagination working overtime, James :)

Roy Jerden

Date: 5/16/2014 6:33:00 PM

I like the double entendres in this haiku, a bit like the eponymous John Mellencamp song. It could be re-written into a bawdy limerick pretty easily, I think. Well done! Cheers, Roy

Larry Berdoo

Date: 3/9/2014 8:34:00 PM

Her innosence, forever gone; for her sake, I hope she had one; who was gentle, and kind. Thats true respect, with a loving touch.

Parissa Joukar

Date: 2/27/2014 8:25:00 PM

Very nice :) Thanks for the warm welcome xx pj

Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/17/2014 6:33:00 PM

Cute, short and sweet I like your analogy it makes me of the cherry trees blossoming in the summer time. cheri how are you doing kiddo? I'm not feeling good today, just a cold i think though, thank you for your sweet comments dear i can't stay on long my computer is over heating so take care

Robert Rogers

Date: 2/1/2014 7:24:00 AM

Interesting analogy...Very nice. Robert xoxoxo

Joe Inka

Date: 12/5/2013 7:59:00 PM

vivid description, great haiku, Even "The Runaways" couldn't do it better

Saanvi Dua

Date: 11/23/2013 1:52:00 AM

Ha.... A very cute Haiku ! Nice to read this ! Love .... Saanvi : )

Robin Davis

Date: 10/23/2013 4:11:00 PM

SKAT This is creative and unique. The reader can interpret it in a few ways. But that's the fun of it. Nice job Thanks for the congrats on my Love poem.