Get Your Premium Membership

Cherry Girl

CHERRY GIRL She stood in the rain there Keeping dry her black hair And red lips , full and round On a windy corner of town. The rain beaded her plastic sheet Protecting the cherries from the street. Fruit filled with sun from less rainy days. With memories of the sun’s warm ways - They told a tale of southern climes And milder winters, warmer times. Black cherries, red cherries, Glorious, luscious, shining berries. She dug her hands into a pile Of a luscious far-south cherry, Ripe and red - all the while Testing the full-round berry, Feeling for soft form With probing fingers firm, Scooping up a large handful, Feeling its weight with her pull, And pushing it slowly And so carefully Into a thin containing bag, So that it fitted snug. Black cherries, ripe but fresh, With thick juice to spill. Red ones with strong tang of south Sun in their soft flesh, Keeping their liquid, until It near melted in the mouth. The fruits of southern ground Red and black and softly round Memories of warming sun around The cherry girl in the rainy town.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/30/2010 5:05:00 PM
lovely memory I would think of bringing it all into the present tense and perhaps not repeating "sun" in 2 lines abutting each other. Congrad's on your win! Light & Love (love the double entadre!)
Login to Reply
Date: 10/16/2010 2:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest...Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 10/14/2010 7:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your Win in Catie's "Fanning the Embers" comp .. Love Jayne
Login to Reply
Date: 10/9/2010 2:02:00 PM
lovely entry, congrats on your win in the contest
Login to Reply
Date: 10/8/2010 11:55:00 AM
Congratulations Sydney on your fourth place, Agape, Moses
Login to Reply
Date: 10/8/2010 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations Sydney on your win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Fanning The Embers". Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 10/8/2010 5:04:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Sydney
Login to Reply
Date: 10/7/2010 7:32:00 PM
Congrats Sydney on your win in Catie's contest with this super entry..enjoy your sweet victory tonight with luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 9/26/2010 2:18:00 PM
Very creative wreite on the cherry girl in the rainy town, enjoyed it. Sydney
Login to Reply
Date: 9/26/2010 1:34:00 PM
Sydney, hello enjoyed the flavor of your poem. I enjoyed your sweet trip down memory lane,..p.d.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs