Cheerful Red House

A snow-splattered,
cheerful red house.
Pine, sparkling white.
A snowman gladly,
proud and robust,
wears red-trimmed black hat,
a long green plaid scarf.
Buttons almost popping
off his pronounced belly.
His arms branch out
as if they are long fingers,
and there rests
a Christmas red cardinal.

Wind-pinched, freckle-faced kid
sweeps in, holding a sled -
done for the day. He’s ready
to make cookies,
just as mom promised.

The inside is warm.
The kid takes off his boots,
gloves, jacket, but not
his smile. Mom kisses
his cold-wet cheek.
He is glad for the warmth.
His pig-tailed sister is waiting
at the table, rolling the dough -
the little bit mama gave her.
They giggle - they will save
a couple cookies for dad,
and a tall glass of milk.

They cut shapes -
trees, sleds, angels
and use leftover dough
for kolaches filled with jelly.
Mom lets the kids
eat them warm from the oven,
but the cookies
must cool and wait
to be buttercream frosted.

Dad will get his cookies
and milk. Bright eyes
watch him. The cardinal
is now perched
on the snowman’s hat.
The snowman
hasn’t moved.

Days go by. The snowman
loses his pouch, buttons
popping off, his carrot nose
on the ground, branches askew.
The bird flew away
a long time ago
and the kids are back
in school.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Legros Kelley Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 2:41 PM
Aw, the passing of time. A long time ago we built a snowman in a rare SW snowfall. One of my daughter's cried as the snowman melted, she was five or six at the time. She had a deep thought about the snowman not lasting...and time itself not lasting. Pretty deep for a little girl! She is a grown woman now, and still is sentimental over that memory. Silly, I know, but your poem actually brings tears to my eyes coupled with memories of that! It would her too <3 This is a fave <3
Rodrigues Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 3:42 PM
Thank you for sharing your sweet memory! :)
Wolf Avatar
October 26, 2023 at 7:44 PM
Critic's Corner: From 'Snowman' to 'S No- Man,' by K. Rodriques...
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2023 at 8:15 PM
LOL
Hind Avatar
October 25, 2023 at 4:55 PM
I really liked this. It made me smile.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2023 at 1:14 PM
:) So glad you smiled! Sometimes we need a bit of H A P P Y!
Hind Avatar
October 25, 2023 at 4:55 PM
Ah! Sorry for commenting twice, lol.
Hind Avatar
October 25, 2023 at 4:54 PM
I really liked this. It made me smile.
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