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Marie McCaid was a hotel maid. She tidied rooms where guests had laid. On opening Room thirty-four the odor sent her to the floor. One guest had clearly overstayed.

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Date: 4/17/2016 4:50:00 PM
Oh dear guess he really overstayed his welcome:-( amusing but it does also make me so sad - unfortunately in Dec 2014 my son's 2 friends were found dead in a hotel room :-( hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/17/2016 9:24:00 PM
Hey no worries about it Paul - Jacques and Torin are forever in my thoughts not a day passes when I don't think of them:-) hugs Jan xx
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 4/17/2016 7:16:00 PM
Jan, I'm sorry my limerick called to mind a tragic event in the life of your son. Because you read many of my poems, I would not have posted the limerick if I had known about your son's experience. Again, I'm sincerely sorry. hugs x x x

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