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Chaste and Chased: Dedicated To Our Friend Eileen Ghali

Coy sideways glances at the man of your dreams Holding hands in secret so nobody sees Amazed more girls don’t act the way you do Sex before marriage – no you want to remain pure Total commitment to one man in your life Even when you’re dating you remain so demure Always ready to see some bedroom action Never turning sex down its like some fatal attraction Devotedly he now pursues Chase begins with eager anticipation His heart pounding and heavy respiration Ardour inflamed by her beauty She’s sublime and sexy, such a cutie Eureka is his final thought Dames sure are naughty when they’re caught Written by 'JaDazzle' Collaboration between Jan Allison & Darren Watson 14th April 2014 The poem is not written about Eileen Ghali but simply dedicated to her. She has been inspirational in encouraging us to continue our collaborative writing after she read our poem 'Bronte Inspiration'.

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Date: 4/16/2014 5:36:00 AM
It is not easy to write a good acrostic poem, and have it rhyme as well. You have done a great collective job here.
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/16/2014 5:39:00 AM
Thanks Robert for the lovely comments. Darren and I now have 4 poems collaboratively - am having the time of my life writing with wonderful poets. Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/14/2014 6:16:00 PM
and yet another one from you two. Wow, you guys are on a roll!!! I was reading this thinking you meant it ABOUT Eileen. But I think she is already married and not dating, right? gosh, I hope I got that right. BTW, I love the Eureka line, naughty when caught!!!
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/14/2014 6:28:00 PM
Eileen, Darren and I had great banter about 'chaste' and 'chased' on the Bronte Inspiration poem and Eileen wrote us that incredible blog and also got us to get the 'JaDazzle' name for our poems. Am truly honoured to work with Darren - the lines just flow between us so naturally with very little alteration. Will add on the poem its for Eileen not about her! Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/14/2014 2:15:00 PM
- Jan, a joy so great ... is to make others happy - A good team you & Darren! - Looking forward to future write :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/14/2014 2:19:00 PM
We have such fun Anne Lise - we have become incredible friends in the space of a few short weeks. Poem no 4 is steammmmmy - just waiting for Darren to proof read and then it will be posted along with my blog. Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 4/14/2014 7:07:00 AM
Hello sweetie ....Here I am again....No, I wasn't CHASED to get here!! ;-) You two are such a joy to read. Honestly.....collaborating isn't easy....You make it smooth as silk....oh...that leads to unchaste thoughts....Read my Confessional Booth on Fire poem...Can't get any naughtier...Thank you for this lovely dedication. I'm honored...
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/14/2014 7:14:00 AM
Thank you Thank you Thank you Eileen - Am sure Darren would echo these words. Watch out for more from 'JaDazzle' in the very near future. Am off to be inspired by you - I may agree to Darren having free rein to express his naughtiness in our collaborations (she says coyly and innocently) LOL hugs Jan x

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