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Chartreuse

Pleiades

Coax me with c a r e s s e s-
Color me chromatic…
Champagne and fine dining
cure my calamities.
Cast aside life’s spent cares-
Cover me in c h a r t r e u s e 
Calla Lilies…tonight.

Letter used: C
7 lines total
6 syllables in each line


Date Written: August 23, 2016

Copyright © Beautiful Scars | Year Posted 2016

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Sunita U.D Palawon Date: 8/26/2016 10:48:00 AM Congrats on your 1st place! :D Sunita Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 8/26/2016 4:32:00 PM thank you sweet Sunita :)-luloo

Teddy Kimathi Date: 8/26/2016 7:52:00 AM Congrats Laura, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-) Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 8/26/2016 4:31:00 PM thank you kind Teddy :)-luloo

Sushma A. Singh Date: 8/26/2016 7:14:00 AM Huge Congrats,Laura! Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 8/26/2016 4:31:00 PM thank you Sushma :)-luloo

Afzal Nusker Date: 8/26/2016 4:57:00 AM Congratulations on your win, Laura. Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 8/26/2016 4:31:00 PM many thanks Afzal :)-luloo

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/26/2016 3:51:00 AM - Congratulations on your winning poems, Laura - hugs and :) Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 8/26/2016 4:30:00 PM thank you sweet Anne-Lise :)-luloo

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 8/26/2016 3:00:00 AM Beautiful. Congratulations. And I learnt what chartreuse means. lots of wishes, Kai Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 8/26/2016 4:30:00 PM thank you Kai :) when I learned it, I fell in love with it, It's so elegant :)-luloo

Viv Wigley Date: 8/26/2016 12:24:00 AM This is truly lovely, Laura, and a worthy topster. Congratulations! Viv x Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 8/26/2016 4:29:00 PM thank you Viv :)-luloo

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/25/2016 9:07:00 PM Back to say I am so happy to see your poem take first place luloo! Big congrats on your special win! 7 ; ) Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 8/26/2016 4:29:00 PM many thanks sweet Connie :)-luloo

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/25/2016 7:35:00 PM ahhh, a big winner I see. I remember it so well. a BIG congrats to you. Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 8/26/2016 11:08:00 AM thank you Andrea :)-luloo

Sandra Haight Date: 8/25/2016 6:22:00 PM Laura, congratulations on your First Place win in the 'Pleiades C' contest! Such romantic and relaxing imagery! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 8/25/2016 6:50:00 PM thank you sweet Sandra :)-luloo

Joseph May Date: 8/25/2016 5:25:00 PM Congrats on topping the list Luloo Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 8/25/2016 5:31:00 PM many thanks Joseph :)-luloo

Paul Callus Date: 8/25/2016 5:02:00 PM Well done Laura!! You wowed me straight away with this creative poem. I am pleased to come back with congratulations:) Honoured to be sharing top place with you:) Regards // paul Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 8/26/2016 10:29:00 AM You are kind and sweet, Laura:) Thank you! Beautiful Scars Date: 8/25/2016 5:09:00 PM thank you sweet man! You are so adored by me and many others...congrats to you also! :)-luloo

Jan Allison Date: 8/25/2016 4:57:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Luloo:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 8/25/2016 5:08:00 PM thank you lovely Jan :)-luloo

Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 8/25/2016 4:45:00 PM Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 8/25/2016 5:08:00 PM thank you sweet Janis :)-luloo

Agnes Krampe Date: 8/25/2016 4:39:00 PM congrats on your win, Laura Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 8/25/2016 5:08:00 PM many thanks lovely Agnes :)-luloo

John Hamilton Date: 8/25/2016 4:34:00 PM Congrats on your big win! Somehow I missed this one but it is obviously very good! Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 8/25/2016 5:07:00 PM thank you very much John :)-luloo

Kim Merryman Date: 8/25/2016 4:26:00 PM Laura, this is a stunning, romantic write! So elegant in its wording. Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings! Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 8/25/2016 5:07:00 PM oh my! thank you so much Kim :) I really enjoy your contests, they are so much fun! thank you :)-luloo

Paul Callus Date: 8/25/2016 4:18:00 AM I love this creative romantic poem, Laura! As lovely as your Calla Lilies:) You tempt us with the beauty of anticipation! ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 8/25/2016 10:13:00 AM Paul....who made you so sweet??? I adore you dear friend...thank you for ALL your kind comments! :)-luloo

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/25/2016 1:56:00 AM You did really well with this enchanting pleiades luloo! Very impressive! 7 ; ) Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 8/25/2016 10:12:00 AM many thanks sweet Connie! :)-luloo

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/24/2016 12:10:00 AM Oooooh. Laura Loo!!! GOOD one. Quite clever. Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 8/24/2016 10:15:00 AM thank you sweet Andrea :)-luloo

Laura Leiser Date: 8/23/2016 11:58:00 PM Wow, this is great, Laura Loo! Beautiful, expressive, creative...loved it! 7 Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 8/24/2016 10:15:00 AM thank you lovely Laura :)-luloo

Jan Allison Date: 8/23/2016 5:12:00 PM clever and creative LuLoo - I hope to 'c' this on the winners list:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 8/24/2016 10:14:00 AM lol you're cute :)-luloo