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Charred Altar

Against the seething horizon you stand malevolently looming, gloating over the tragic fate of the vanquished, the doomed now dying; there, the wounded many, they crawl, drag cold corpses through bloodied debris; smoky embers, ashes of home, shards of shattered hearts, maimed memory; the old, the ill, the children, if you say so, will be blasted away as nothing more than burnt offerings on the charred altar of peace, you'd say!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/19/2009 4:41:00 AM
Vivid imagery and striking language... a stunning piece my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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