Charlieku: 'Crazy Love'

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My model granddaughter (top photo) Resemblance of an abused girl (online photo)--"I cannot fathom my granddaughter, let alone anybody--girl or boy--to be in an inescapable abusive situation."

*Charlieku format Syllable count 2,3,2,3,2 3,2,3,2 3,2,3 2,3 3 He hits me, hurting I fall and he runs away. He comes back, again hits and run, all bruised. Cycle of suffering, and pain. Why do I endure? Crazy love!? Date: 05/25/2019

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/26/2019 7:59:00 AM

Right?! Too many suffer in this way. Many feel there’s no way out. Well written.

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/26/2019 8:04:00 AM

So true Kim, we can only empathize, Aloha wk

Aditi Sheemar

Date: 5/26/2019 3:52:00 AM

Yes! Crazy love, makes us submissive, emotional and weak.....we loose the ability to see and understand that, he, whom we adore so much actually doesn't relate to us at all. sometimes I feel, life could me more beautiful without such unwanted burden of relationships. Its extremely sad that some people become so violent and cruel.

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/26/2019 4:03:00 AM

'Tis not love but a sick mind in need of help before it is too late, Aloha wk