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Character of a Boy

M.K. was character as boy more so as a man His sister Mary Alice was away Boy they would have fun this day great game plan Stay hidden from mom no toting water today Two weeks later momma from kitchen calls M. K. fetch in water from the deep well As he like Tazmanian Devil fireballs Into the kitchen overcome by smell Spies momma with a fine tooth comb_ combing Mary Alice's long hair with kerosene Immediately looks for brother; homing In on him, white with fear tells of kitchen scene His brother always cut all boys' dark hair Begged his brother to skin his white head bald Of course, when brother heard_lice_ chill up spine scare Then they heard their mother from kitchen call Monday school day after two hours of chores M.K. into the classroom did sort of crawl Hidden, teacher said hat off_ underscores Off comes the hat, laughter a caterwaul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/27/2011 5:48:00 PM
It's a beautiful thing that after you have written and shared so many poems, your style and story telling continues to grow! great poem!!
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Date: 2/27/2011 8:02:00 AM
Wishing u a pleasant and happy Sunday Sara and thankxx for your many kind comments and compliments to my poetry and contest entries luv..
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Date: 2/26/2011 10:58:00 AM
enjoyed this immensely Sara.
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Date: 2/26/2011 10:18:00 AM
This is a excerpt from the life of my father as he told it..He said that the teacher told him to take his hat, which he had pulled down to his ears, off ..When he did his head was a white as cotton, all the children were screaming and laughing..The teacher game them a fifteen minute recess and then resumed class..That was when it was a one room school..Sara
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