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I pushed at the open door no sound just darkness inside. Dust filtered my nostrils, a mustiness of lost years inhabited my senses. A loose floorboard creaked in the stairwell, the aroma of her Chanel provoked memories of my living hell. A tear of self-pity congealed in the dirt at my feet I switched on the light "Hello son I knew you'd be back; He's gone..." 1.ENTERED IN 'Chaptor ' 1 Matt Calari Nov 1 2022 2. entered in Constance la France ' Writing Challenge - X'd Poems Second Chance' Contest Dec 5 2022

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Date: 12/10/2022 5:57:00 PM
Brian, your chapter poem is wonderful. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge- x'd poem - Second Chance, well done, just a little detail missed, no date that the NA contest was judged blessings
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Date: 12/6/2022 8:28:00 PM
Dear Brian, a very intriguing piece. I admire your use of atmospheric imagery. Congratulations for your win in Constance’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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