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Chaos, Shorter Version

she invited chaos
into her life
now it won’t leave
the guest becoming
the bully



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Posted on March 1, 2019

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John Lawless

Date: 3/1/2019 4:15:00 PM

Ah, so true....so hard to invite it OUT once we allow it in....

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/1/2019 4:19:00 PM

Indeed, thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, John.

Wren Rushing

Date: 3/1/2019 11:04:00 AM

My mother would always say no good deed goes unpunished. Your poem reminds me of that saying. Great write Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/1/2019 11:23:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and compliment, Wren.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/1/2019 4:00:00 AM

And take that and that and that. I feel like it was written for me, through me and about me. I truly LOVE it.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/1/2019 8:37:00 AM

Thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.

Andrew Fairchild

Date: 3/1/2019 1:21:00 AM

OO! 'The guest becomes the bully'. Strong work! Strong words!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/1/2019 3:17:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Andrew.