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Chaos Heart

Unrelenting 
Unrepenting
Disingenuous incensing
Broken promise
Faulty premise
Drunk with grandiose suggesting

All chaotic 
Schizophrenic
Catatonic
Photogenic
Served with Pennyroyal tea
Pinched with acid hydrochloric

I'm the grain of salt that's taken
as my core is always shaken
I refuse to see I'm free
when my gifts return forsaken

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James Fraser

May 25, 2009 at 2:59 PM

Incredible piece Yoni, cleverly written, James

Sara Lokken

February 2, 2009 at 12:08 PM

Wow. My guts are churning. I feel shivers. Exacting and powerful....Sara

Eric Nolan

January 8, 2009 at 9:41 PM

Nice write Yoni, simple, clean and powerful. Well done.

Debbie Guzzi

January 8, 2009 at 5:09 AM

Since the poem above was excellent as a poem. By which I meant extremely thought provoking. I will continue to address the thought ;). Who has forsaken your ego self the id in you? A Lady? God? Mankind? or have you forsaken yourself? Light & Love Debbie Guzzi

Debbie Guzzi

January 8, 2009 at 5:06 AM

Hi Yoni, "I refuse to see I'm free" but you do see it and deny it. You are free, you are responsibe. Regarding my poem "The Almighty" .Your interpetation of "me" versus "them"; you were correct! I think other folks think (only God is the ultimate & only entity having a large enough perspective to judge) they are going to Heaven because of their beliefs; others are going to Hell. I believe in reincarnation & that here on earth we make our own Heaven's & Hell's. Light & Love Debbie Guzzi

Mohammad Yamin

January 7, 2009 at 10:08 AM

Yoni, A brilliant write. I like it. Yes, your thoughts are close to my thinking. All great people think alike. Keep it up. Thanks also for your enlightened comments on my poem Obstinate Heart. -Mohammad