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Chaos Heart

Unrelenting Unrepenting Disingenuous incensing Broken promise Faulty premise Drunk with grandiose suggesting All chaotic Schizophrenic Catatonic Photogenic Served with Pennyroyal tea Pinched with acid hydrochloric I'm the grain of salt that's taken as my core is always shaken I refuse to see I'm free when my gifts return forsaken

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James Fraser

Date: 5/25/2009 2:59:00 PM

Incredible piece Yoni, cleverly written, James

Sara Lokken

Date: 2/2/2009 12:08:00 PM

Wow. My guts are churning. I feel shivers. Exacting and powerful....Sara

Eric Nolan

Date: 1/8/2009 9:41:00 PM

Nice write Yoni, simple, clean and powerful. Well done.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/8/2009 5:09:00 AM

Since the poem above was excellent as a poem. By which I meant extremely thought provoking. I will continue to address the thought ;). Who has forsaken your ego self the id in you? A Lady? God? Mankind? or have you forsaken yourself? Light & Love Debbie Guzzi

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/8/2009 5:06:00 AM

Hi Yoni, "I refuse to see I'm free" but you do see it and deny it. You are free, you are responsibe. Regarding my poem "The Almighty" .Your interpetation of "me" versus "them"; you were correct! I think other folks think (only God is the ultimate & only entity having a large enough perspective to judge) they are going to Heaven because of their beliefs; others are going to Hell. I believe in reincarnation & that here on earth we make our own Heaven's & Hell's. Light & Love Debbie Guzzi

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 1/7/2009 10:08:00 AM

Yoni, A brilliant write. I like it. Yes, your thoughts are close to my thinking. All great people think alike. Keep it up. Thanks also for your enlightened comments on my poem Obstinate Heart. -Mohammad

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/7/2009 8:03:00 AM

What? ...you swallow a dictionary or somethin'? 3/4/5 syllable words so neatly incorporated into the flow... Well done Yoni! Best wishes, Keith