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Chaos and Calm

At the end of the breakwater I stand between two extremes. On one side, the bay's agitations and hurl of water smashing against boulders, on the other, the calm lick of waves barely rising above a ripple. Such division throws the mind out of balance as if it seeks an equilibrium, a point where opposites are reconciled in a bland soup of sameness. A hurried scramble to find the predictable in the messy tangles of chance. The world is not like this. Creation is born out of the spewing throats of volcanoes, earth upheavals and flooding rains then given time in a pause to rest and put together its masterpiece. For us, storms, earthquakes, raging fires are seen as arrows of misfortune flung by nature or vengeful gods. For creation they are tools wielded out of a primary need, something beyond the grasp of mere earthly calibration. Praise be for chaos and calm, the hammer and polish of creation.

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Date: 11/28/2023 4:36:00 PM
wow and superbly done, Paul! I agree with these lines: For creation they are tools wielded out of a primary need, something beyond the grasp of mere earthly calibration. Praise be for chaos and calm, the hammer and polish of creation. I agree, sometimes we react to chaos when that's exactly what's needed...like when writing poetry...sometimes the process seems chaotic but eventually words, etc., fall into place...no need to fret, right?
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Paul Willason
Date: 11/29/2023 2:56:00 AM
Your comments, Sara, are valued and I really appreciate the time and thought you have afforded the poem. Your comments are always sipped with pleasure and pondered...thankyou so much. Paul
Date: 11/28/2023 5:46:00 AM
I honestly think I could read your poetry all day. You always hold the reader in the palm of your hand. You are an excellent writer, Paul. This one is no exception! Much respect to you my friend:)
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Paul Willason
Date: 11/29/2023 2:51:00 AM
I blush Daniel with such an endorsement....thankyou so much. Your support has been constant and one that has added to the plessure I find in writing...you are a valued friend.
Date: 11/28/2023 4:30:00 AM
And as with every great magician nature never lets you know what's really going on....Nice write Paul, a temporal tickler
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Paul Willason
Date: 11/29/2023 2:46:00 AM
Thanks John....does the dramatic at times...wiping out the dinosaurs to give us some space. Lets hope there's no repeat in the immediate future. Cheers, Paul
Date: 11/28/2023 2:42:00 AM
I feel ill equipped to properly appreciate this (in the sense of fully absorb every nuance) but it resonates strongly with a logic that drives me. I create by starting with mess and letting it piece by piece slot into place in a way that appears to be chance and likely to fail but some unknown knowledge more often than not ensures it doesn't (one of the reasons I can't bake very well, so I don't bring down my average with bread and cakes as guacamole is more my strength).
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Paul Willason
Date: 11/29/2023 2:43:00 AM
You entered the domain of the poem beautifully DD, an honored guest. You have the most incredible turn of mind in yr comments which is enthralling and creative...always appreciated. Regards, Paul

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