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Changing Season - 2 haikus

The gentle sunlight
On a winter afternoon
Shining on my face
Informs me how soon
Fragrant flowers will replace
The last soft snowflakes.

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Bill Baker

Date: 8/15/2025 10:57:00 PM

The double Haiku was well-written, and the imagery was pleasing, Riley. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Riley Ryleigh
Date: 8/17/2025 1:03:00 PM

Thank you!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/15/2025 5:05:00 PM

beautiful, absolutely beautiful. I love winter's gentle sunlight; it gives me hope that spring will eventually arrive. Not a winter person at all! Well penned, Sara

Riley Ryleigh
Date: 8/17/2025 1:04:00 PM

I'm glad you enjoyed the read. :)