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a sculpture carved without a finish...... a painting left incomplete...... a book still with a bookmark in page ten.... an emotion well hidden,well kept.... deep cut in empty heart once full of love.... forever,things left unsaid.......... -------------------------------------------------------------------------charma

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Shirin Neshat

Date: 6/5/2009 6:29:00 PM

keep it up.

Sebastian Aaron Baez

Date: 6/1/2009 4:04:00 PM

A drawing left unfinished, which usually happens to me cause I'm sacred I might mess it up, the draw backs of a perfectionist, and yes I will eat my sandwich, Thank you. :)

James Peranteau

Date: 5/29/2009 10:42:00 AM

Charmaine,..this is why my writes never stop,..never enough said my poetic friend

Emily Kroeger

Date: 5/27/2009 3:02:00 PM

Wow, I like this. Your really good.

Brandy Megens

Date: 5/27/2009 2:41:00 PM

THATS WHY I SAY LIVE FOR THE MOMENT YOU NEVER KNOW WHY PUT OFF TOMORROW WHAT WE COULD DO TODAY YOU NEVER KNOW NOTHINGS PROMISED

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/27/2009 2:34:00 PM

This piece breaks my heart....an emotion well hidden, well kept..deep cut in empty heart once full of love..those lines are a poem....my heart can hear the tears....well done.

Lena Townsend

Date: 5/27/2009 2:18:00 PM

A sad write but very well done. This one makes this reader want to call everyone she loves and let them know. Very insightful and I love the unfinished aspect throughout as "changes" often seem to leave things undone. great writing. Smiles from Lolita