Change of Address

Walking like a dead man
on down the boulevard,
once life seemed so easy
when did it get so hard.

Trying to earn a living,
out to make a buck.
Hoping to keep the roof on,
I just ran out of luck.

Turned into a tavern
I passed along the way,
me and Jose Cuervo
we drank away the day.

As the bottle emptied
my problems all got worse,
out of work will kill you
but boozing is a curse.

The new roof for my shelter
is over near the ridge,
please drop by if you're around
the Holston River Bridge.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Ball Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 9:17 AM
Ah Jesus never promised a Christian an easy life. He just promised to be there to help us through the rough spots. Great job here my friend and hope the roof is on by now. God Bless, JB
Lamoureux Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 8:21 AM
Ditto!
Debole Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 4:51 PM
Hello John, Clever way of telling people about a no-win situation for someone who is homeless and finds comfort with alcohol. Wish that people didn't find themselves in this situation at all. - Gail
Summers Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 6:06 PM
There are always solutions to the the homeless problems but no one seems to want to prioritize them. Thanks so much for reading and commenting. John
Lamoureux Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 6:36 AM
Thanks for dropping by for a visit. This was worth another read.;0)
Summers Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 5:27 PM
Thanks Richard, drop by anytime. John
Peck Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 3:59 PM
John, That is so real life. What tragedies we have living on the street. So many with addictions, so many we can't help.
Summers Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 9:21 PM
Thanks so much for reading and commenting Ann. It is sad that homelessness gets so little attention. Thanks again. John
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March 19, 2021 at 9:02 AM
I enjoyed this poem. It simply tells a story of real life happenings. Being new at poetry I find ' simply ' easy to understand and most encouraging for a poet like me. Thankyou.
Summers Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 10:55 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting on the poem, it is appreciated. John
Ball Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 12:45 PM
This is too cute J. You are so right. The answer to anything is never in the bottom of a bottle. Good job. excellent rhyme and rhythm. God Bless, JB
Summers Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 9:00 AM
Hi Judy, glad you liked it. John
Faulkner Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 7:51 PM
Very poignant and sad, I have seen many bridges like this one~
Summers Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 9:01 AM
Hello Michelle, it was so nice of you to read and comment on the poem. John
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March 15, 2021 at 6:15 PM
Enjoyed the reading of your poem with its great descriptiveness and rhyming.
Summers Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 9:03 AM
Thanks Robert, nice to see you again. You’re time spent here is appreciated. John
Wolf Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 6:46 PM
This is the kind of social commentary I like best, John. Each bottle drained massages the brain. Cheers, Gershon
Summers Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 11:17 AM
Thanks Gershon, have a good day. John
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March 7, 2021 at 12:30 PM
- Holston River Bridge sounds like a cold and lonely place ... I hope you will soon find a warmer place, John - // Anne-Lise :)
Summers Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 1:44 PM
The bridge mentioned in the poem is cold and lonely but the river and surrounding landscape is nice. Thanks so much for reading. John
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March 7, 2021 at 8:06 AM
A great way to start my day. I thought I would read your poems until I got to one that didn’t catch my interest. It was close on the Limerick *lol* good thing I started at your first piece. I throughly enjoyed your writing. I’m under a different bridge here at the soup. You are welcome to visit any time. Blessings Rick.
Summers Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 2:26 PM
Well, let me say to you again thank you very much for taking the time to read and comment on my work. It is very much appreciated. John
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March 7, 2021 at 12:55 AM
The Holston River Bridge, sounds a posh address, as long as you are warm and dry and have a comfy bed... A good read John ~ Belle
Summers Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 1:45 PM
Thanks Belle, it is always a pleasure having you stop by. John
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