Chances

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Chances I saw her again today, at the coffee shop. She goes there very Tuesday, after bible study. I think she is beautiful. There is something about her that is, “right”. I am not good at this. The next time I saw her, she was singing, in the choir. The angels were in the gallery, listening… A few days later, at the store… Again at the bank, and the post office. I tried. I stepped toward her. The last time I saw her… Sunday. She made a lovely bride.

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Douglas Brown

Date: 9/12/2019 11:56:00 AM

"I am not good at this". A poet is a bit of a spectator into the "Perfect" which doesn't exist. Really good,Ann.

Ann Foster
Date: 9/12/2019 12:19:00 PM

Wow. what a nice complement. Thank you. Hugs. Ann

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/12/2019 12:46:00 AM

Oh this is absolutely 100 percent darling, Ann. Love this one.

Ann Foster
Date: 9/12/2019 9:34:00 AM

We always delay... sometimes too late... Good morning kind friend. Thank you for dropping in... Hugs. Have the very best morning...butterflies and bees with tiny elves that sing AbC's to trees. Ann