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Champa

Brimming with memories old In its light golden look What a scent, please behold There beside the rippling brook We call it golden champa The smell relaxing and inspiring Champa-necklace would wear Radha When with Krishna she is dancing In our lyrics of three thousand years Champa finds a thousand mention Sometimes in smile and then in tears With Champa many a lovely session With us it's now rainy season Lovely Champa silk-clad We savour the smell and stay to listen The toop, toop, music sad ______________________________________________________________ Note:(1) Champa – A small, light gold coloured, a little longish, and intensely fragrant Indian flower. It is a common Indian name of girls too on obvious grounds. (2) Radha, the female figure and Krishna, the male deity are mythological lovers steeped in divine romancing. Thousands of years old and still very much current romantic literature dealing with their love is an Indian asset. (3) What you say in English ‘Pitter-pattered’, in Bengali we say ‘toop, toop’. Imagine the rains falling on a tin or concrete or leafy surface and feel the lyric in toop, toop.

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Date: 8/14/2016 12:26:00 PM
oh! lovely metaphor...a strong romantic flavor enriched the momentum of the lovely flower and hence made the piece so attractive .loved the write.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/14/2016 9:59:00 PM
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Date: 8/13/2016 3:10:00 AM
Hi Probir, lovely poem about a lovely flower, wish I could see one, as Peter says he loves the spirituality of the Indian People, in fact one our daughter in laws is an Indian Girl and she is adorable, I have never been to India, closest I have been was Sri Lanka, anyway my friend beautiful write...Take care........Vera
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/13/2016 5:51:00 AM
Thank you Vera for your kind visit and comments ...
Date: 8/12/2016 5:29:00 AM
Enchanting and didactic poem that leaves no one indifferent dear, Probir! A seven!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/12/2016 12:46:00 PM
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Date: 8/11/2016 7:16:00 AM
It is a beautiful poem which I honestly would not have understood without your footnotes. Thank you for sharing.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/12/2016 2:03:00 AM
Thank you ...

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