Chalice of the Night Premiere Contest Winner

She visits me in the darkness of night; a soulless winged creature of vampire lore. A shadowless shadow that shuns the light; she softly scratches at my bedroom door. With my heart pounding, I opened the door; rapturously under her ghoulish trance. And after we kissed, I craved something more, as we swirled in the throws of our blood dance. And we waltzed to the very edge of time; drinking deep from the chalice of the night. Slightly nervous, my anxieties climb, for every vampire's kiss starts with a bite. Yet, as befitting creatures of the night, our silhouettes morph into bats in flight.

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Date: 1/24/2022 9:29:00 PM
What a fun write Emile and it garnered the Trophy! Congratulations my friend. I am so happy to see you win the trophy. Blessings xxoo
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/25/2022 7:46:00 AM
Thanks, Connie, your comments are always much appreciated, my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/24/2022 8:44:00 PM
Good job on your win, and I must say it was a little bit creepy. That was the point though so good job.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/25/2022 7:45:00 AM
Thanks, Miranda, your comments are much appreciated, my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/24/2022 7:22:00 PM
A huge CONGRATS on your well-deserved top win with this gripping, vividly descriptive sonnet, Emile! Janice
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/25/2022 7:43:00 AM
Thank you so much, Janice, you have brought a smile to y day, my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/24/2022 7:18:00 PM
Perfection, Emile. When I read it, I realized it was a winner! Congratulations! This was a tough contest to write for.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/25/2022 11:44:00 AM
You are so deserving, Emile, and the more of your poetry I read the more I realize that you are one of the most gifted poets alive today! Write on, my friend.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/25/2022 7:42:00 AM
Thanks, Milt, your comments always make me feel good inside my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/24/2022 5:58:00 PM
A very beautiful sonnet. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/25/2022 7:40:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/24/2022 4:14:00 PM
Emile, Your poem ended up in Brian Strand's contest instead of Chantelle's. Maybe it's not too late to change.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/25/2022 7:40:00 AM
Thanks, Ann, but I entered and won both contests, my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/22/2022 2:44:00 PM
Wow, this is an enchanting way of looking at the Chalice of Night, Emile. Enjoyed it and best wishes in the contest. I'm reading several of these poems that have such different approaches to the theme. It will be interesting to see what Chantelle likes.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/23/2022 8:07:00 AM
Thanks, Milt, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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