Premiere Contest WinnerChalice of the Night

She visits in the darkness of the night: a soulless, winged creature of vampire lore. A shadowless shadow shunning the light, softly scratches upon my bedroom door. With my heart pounding, I open the door; rapturously under her ghoulish trance. And the moment we kiss, I crave much more, as we swirl in the throes of our blood dance. And waltzing to the very edge of time, each vampiric kiss: begins with a bite. Slightly nervous, my anxieties climb: drinking deep from the chalice of the night. And as befitting creatures of the night; our silhouettes morph into bats in flight.
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Marcum Wong Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 9:29 PM
What a fun write Emile and it garnered the Trophy! Congratulations my friend. I am so happy to see you win the trophy. Blessings xxoo
Pinet Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 7:46 AM
Thanks, Connie, your comments are always much appreciated, my friend, Emile.
Hawley Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 8:44 PM
Good job on your win, and I must say it was a little bit creepy. That was the point though so good job.
Pinet Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 7:45 AM
Thanks, Miranda, your comments are much appreciated, my friend, Emile.
Canerdy Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 7:22 PM
A huge CONGRATS on your well-deserved top win with this gripping, vividly descriptive sonnet, Emile! Janice
Pinet Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 7:43 AM
Thank you so much, Janice, you have brought a smile to y day, my friend, Emile.
Hankins Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 7:18 PM
Perfection, Emile. When I read it, I realized it was a winner! Congratulations! This was a tough contest to write for.
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January 25, 2022 at 11:44 AM
You are so deserving, Emile, and the more of your poetry I read the more I realize that you are one of the most gifted poets alive today! Write on, my friend.
Pinet Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 7:42 AM
Thanks, Milt, your comments always make me feel good inside my friend, Emile.
Alex Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 5:58 PM
A very beautiful sonnet. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Pinet Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 7:40 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Peck Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 4:14 PM
Emile, Your poem ended up in Brian Strand's contest instead of Chantelle's. Maybe it's not too late to change.
Pinet Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 7:40 AM
Thanks, Ann, but I entered and won both contests, my friend, Emile.
Hankins Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 2:44 PM
Wow, this is an enchanting way of looking at the Chalice of Night, Emile. Enjoyed it and best wishes in the contest. I'm reading several of these poems that have such different approaches to the theme. It will be interesting to see what Chantelle likes.
Pinet Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 8:07 AM
Thanks, Milt, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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