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Cell Phone

Not home Mind blown No ring tone all alone zone...... metronome Not home Lives monochrome all alone zone.......... metronome Not home So silicone No ring tone all alone beer zone?

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James Fraser

Date: 5/29/2010 7:10:00 AM

Haha, koolio poem Deborah. Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest >> James

John Freeman

Date: 5/28/2010 5:31:00 PM

Cool ideal Deborah. Congratulation on your win. Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/28/2010 4:11:00 PM

Congratulaions on your win. Love,J

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/28/2010 2:41:00 PM

HI, Deb, congrats on the HM. I love how you ended this one with that beer zone? hahaha. Great repeating metronome line to lend it atmosphere. How is your weekend starting out? LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/28/2010 9:54:00 AM

Congrats Debbie on your HM in the Monorhyme fcontest with this funny write capturing a great honor for u to enjoy... my cell phone is another organ of mine...haha... luv.. pupil... have a great memorial day weekend...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/28/2010 9:19:00 AM

Enjoyed the meter and use of monorhyme, Deborah. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Brian Strand

Date: 4/7/2010 11:44:00 PM

Thank you for supporting my contest Debbie.Rgds Brian

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/6/2010 12:43:00 PM

Cute write .. delight... I am never without mine..guilty... SOUP MAIL.. as u requested in a few...luv.. Linda-Marie..

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/6/2010 10:10:00 AM

very cute footle I enjoyed it and thank you so much for your comments and support faleshia

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/6/2010 7:18:00 AM

HI, Deb, this reminds me of ET. call home. haha. Um, about your haiku. To me it was just really nice but was too much of your "putting your own words into it" instead of creating the visual all the way through. I think it was the first line that didn't seem haiku to me. I'll have to go see it again. LUv, andrea