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Cell Phone

Not home
Mind blown
No ring tone
all alone
zone......
metronome

Not home
Lives monochrome
all alone
zone..........
metronome

Not home
So silicone
No ring tone
all alone
beer zone?

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James Fraser Date: 5/29/2010 7:10:00 AM Haha, koolio poem Deborah. Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest >> James Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 5/28/2010 5:31:00 PM Cool ideal Deborah. Congratulation on your win. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 5/28/2010 4:11:00 PM Congratulaions on your win. Love,J Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/28/2010 2:41:00 PM HI, Deb, congrats on the HM. I love how you ended this one with that beer zone? hahaha. Great repeating metronome line to lend it atmosphere. How is your weekend starting out? LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/28/2010 9:54:00 AM Congrats Debbie on your HM in the Monorhyme fcontest with this funny write capturing a great honor for u to enjoy... my cell phone is another organ of mine...haha... luv.. pupil... have a great memorial day weekend... Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/28/2010 9:19:00 AM Enjoyed the meter and use of monorhyme, Deborah. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 4/7/2010 11:44:00 PM Thank you for supporting my contest Debbie.Rgds Brian Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/6/2010 12:43:00 PM Cute write .. delight... I am never without mine..guilty... SOUP MAIL.. as u requested in a few...luv.. Linda-Marie.. Login to Reply

Faleshia Murphy Date: 4/6/2010 10:10:00 AM very cute footle I enjoyed it and thank you so much for your comments and support faleshia Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/6/2010 7:18:00 AM HI, Deb, this reminds me of ET. call home. haha. Um, about your haiku. To me it was just really nice but was too much of your "putting your own words into it" instead of creating the visual all the way through. I think it was the first line that didn't seem haiku to me. I'll have to go see it again. LUv, andrea Login to Reply