Cell Phone

Not home
Mind blown
No ring tone
all alone
zone......
metronome

Not home
Lives monochrome
all alone
zone..........
metronome

Not home
So silicone
No ring tone
all alone
beer zone?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 7:10 AM
Haha, koolio poem Deborah. Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest >> James
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May 28, 2010 at 5:31 PM
Cool ideal Deborah. Congratulation on your win. Agape, Moses
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May 28, 2010 at 4:11 PM
Congratulaions on your win. Love,J
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May 28, 2010 at 2:41 PM
HI, Deb, congrats on the HM. I love how you ended this one with that beer zone? hahaha. Great repeating metronome line to lend it atmosphere. How is your weekend starting out? LUv, Andrea
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May 28, 2010 at 9:54 AM
Congrats Debbie on your HM in the Monorhyme fcontest with this funny write capturing a great honor for u to enjoy... my cell phone is another organ of mine...haha... luv.. pupil... have a great memorial day weekend...
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May 28, 2010 at 9:19 AM
Enjoyed the meter and use of monorhyme, Deborah. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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April 7, 2010 at 11:44 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Debbie.Rgds Brian
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April 6, 2010 at 12:43 PM
Cute write .. delight... I am never without mine..guilty... SOUP MAIL.. as u requested in a few...luv.. Linda-Marie..
Murphy Avatar
April 6, 2010 at 10:10 AM
very cute footle I enjoyed it and thank you so much for your comments and support faleshia
Dietrich Avatar
April 6, 2010 at 7:18 AM
HI, Deb, this reminds me of ET. call home. haha. Um, about your haiku. To me it was just really nice but was too much of your "putting your own words into it" instead of creating the visual all the way through. I think it was the first line that didn't seem haiku to me. I'll have to go see it again. LUv, andrea
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