Celestial Gaze

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Ballads and candles of lyrical light in stemmed yearning breezes of ethereal pearl shimmering translucence in a velvety damask A celestial serenade ~ glittering gold, a halo of airy haze An ostentatious cynosure, a wispy elixir Calcite talismans and ethereal melody. The cosmos is in harmony zingy zest blasts in sapphirelike gaze A flow dashed over the scary abyss. an emollient erstwhile fugacious lyric

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Kim Merryman

Date: 8/8/2023 9:35:00 AM

Amazing descriptive beauty portrayed! Congrats on your win, Sotto! Blessings, Kim M

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/3/2023 8:45:00 AM

Dear Lasaad, the talent of your poetic pen spills golden verse upon the grateful page. Your exquisite imagery, rich metaphors and dashes of alliteration combine for a stellar poem. Indeed, "The cosmos is in harmony", and so is my heart's imagination after reading this exceptional piece. Simply Splendid! Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Judy Ball

Date: 7/31/2023 9:56:00 AM

Beautiful Lasaad. You capture the matchless beauty of the heavens along with the fearsome vastness of the universe. Love it. God Bless, JB

Valsa George

Date: 7/30/2023 8:48:00 PM

Your vocabulary, just wonderful and your poetic adroitness- unmatched! I float in this celestial symphony !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/30/2023 1:55:00 PM

- A beautiful serenade with sweet harmony, Las :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/30/2023 8:50:00 AM

Ballads and candles of lyrical light in stemmed yearning breezes of ethereal pearl shimmering translucence in a velvety damask--WOW! splendid descriptions, my friend. You are on a roll!!

Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/29/2023 6:44:00 PM

Your poem has a zingy zest, a soft effervescence can be felt as one reads. The imagery is amazing, and the feeling tantalizing. No doubt it's wonderful poem.