Celestial Beings

A familiar aroma wafted towards me,
As I looked up into blue azure skies,
And far beyond, a golden horizon.
I could barely see the shapes of an old
Man holding a young child’s hand,
The man wore a long white robe
And was smoking a handcrafted
Pipe, and the spiraling smoke from it, 
Triggered a memory, who was this man.
He didn’t speak much until
I asked him who the child was, He
Granted us a short encounter
The old man said,
So that you can briefly meet.
Tears rolled down my face
As I took the child
And held him tightly in my arms,
For an everlasting moment, a miracle!
We are your guardian angels he said, 
Taking back my bundle of life,
And gradually disappearing with his
Charge, leaving behind a trail of smoke
The aroma of which was distinctly the
Tobacco my father smoked. My father
Holding my child's hand, his grandson
Who died when only five days old, 
And whom I had never met,
Celestial beings permitted to appear, 
And just as quickly disappear, 
Their message I believe, that one day we 
Would meet, in the presence of His love 
Within the realms of heaven above.



Poem of the Day - 18.9.2021

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Date: 10/16/2021 3:55:00 PM
Jennifer, congratulations on your POTD - truly a mystical visit visit from eternal love comforting your heart. I had a visit similar to this and I have never forgotten the sense of peace and resolution. Wonderfully told story. Blessings to you my friend.
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Date: 10/16/2021 5:34:00 AM
Jennifer you must have been comforted after experiencing that celestial visit from your loved ones in the sky. I once had a visiter come to me in the night long ago. I knew who it was and why he came, I felt peaceful and comforted, it’s never happened again. Congratulations on a well deserved poem of the day… Belle
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Date: 10/11/2021 3:41:00 PM
wow, this is SO nice, and I see it got a POTD . Big congrats for that, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/2/2021 9:53:00 AM
Jenn, this is on the new best poems list Congrats, I love all of it, so creative. Pangie
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Date: 9/25/2021 10:13:00 AM
Hey, are you alright Jennifer? You aren't that active. I hope all is well at your end.
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Date: 9/25/2021 6:54:00 AM
Many of us have a spiritual guide that stays with us ALWAYS, first one we see when we return home. Reading this, emotion bunched up in my throat until its heaviness brought tears for you, for life, for love. Seems you have had your share of challenges this past year, too? I'm touched by all your messages, you cared and some others. Is there anything I can do for you via positive meditation and prayer? A powerful poem - not for wimps, is it? Be golden ... CayCay
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Date: 9/25/2021 1:41:00 AM
True guardians Jennifer
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Date: 9/22/2021 7:08:00 AM
This is so beautiful and touching, Jenn, it tugs at my heart. Congrats on your well deserving POTD. Hugs, John
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Date: 9/21/2021 10:47:00 AM
Hello Jennifer, I do believe in guardian angels, i believe they are around us. Hugs.
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Date: 9/21/2021 7:20:00 AM
Amazing heartfelt poetry, I see it was POTD, not at all surprised.
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Date: 9/20/2021 10:00:00 PM
A poem with deep emotions. Pity it's a real occurrence, so that one can feel the pain of separation. A worthy POTD.
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Date: 9/20/2021 4:28:00 PM
I know you can feel your father and your child so close. They will always be a part of you. Your thoughts caress gently around me. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Congratulations Jennifer, on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 9/20/2021 2:56:00 PM
WoW! Such a deeply moving piece. POTD most assuredly deserved for this . I was deeply touched having lost a baby of my own. My first baby died within me before birth. God Bless my friend. JB
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Date: 9/20/2021 2:44:00 PM
Congratulations for POTD Jennifer :)
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Date: 9/20/2021 1:35:00 PM
Jennifer, this touches the heart at a deep level of comfort and amazing. Congratulations on your POTD dear friend. Miracles do happen and we definitely are not alone. Blessings!
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Date: 9/20/2021 1:10:00 PM
My congratulations for your POTD.
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Date: 9/20/2021 1:00:00 PM
Hay hay poem of the day for the awesome girl.. Congratulations my friend.. a love to be felt :)
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Date: 9/20/2021 11:37:00 AM
You are on a roll! Congrats on POTD, Jennifer! Light and Love, Gershon
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Date: 9/20/2021 11:00:00 AM
A lovely poem. Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 9/20/2021 9:15:00 AM
"Celestial beings who dropped by... for their love to be felt.. ".... what a superb ending to a marvellous story... I loved your imagination as you wrote " familiar distinct aroma... "... sometimes we remember our loved ones with some familiar aroma... Hearty congrats on your well deserving POTD dear Jenni... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 9/20/2021 10:34:00 AM
There has to be some criticism,maybe you know better,or you might have held it back on purpose,as i have said you know better.
Date: 9/20/2021 8:39:00 AM
Hi Jenny, I’m so happy to see you get such an honor with this well-written write. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day; it was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/20/2021 8:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your P.O.T.D. win. A wonderful story/write. "Love It" I have talked with people who have seen and even talked with angels. I would love to do this. Have a great/blessed day...............
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Date: 9/20/2021 8:10:00 AM
This is a marvelous poem, Jennifer. Congratulations on your P.O.T.D.!
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Date: 9/20/2021 8:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD honor! Blessings!
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Date: 9/20/2021 8:00:00 AM
A very powerful and apperciated piece. Melancholy, reminiscence, joy, regret, serendipity, hope all in these wonderful lines. Congrats on your PODT.
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