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Celeste Romance

I gaze at those fireflies in your butter-sweet eyes that shine, succulent with white lush pulp of love's purity, you hue my wildflower heart with hyacinth, as we twirl like spring-shaded tulips in life's regal-black psalms; mon cherie, I wish for stars to sequin your shimmering wine soul and cradle comets of faith in your fate, as, rubies glazed with honeyed hibiscus and nectarine daisies will be my pink muse, forevermore true; afterlife shall foretell our lavender soliloquy of celeste romance, whipped in soft beige affection, and your coral spirit will eternally emphasise cherry letters as tokens of swan-shaped twin flames.

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Date: 11/4/2023 2:43:00 AM
Creative lines penned in this one. Thanks for sharing and dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 10/24/2023 12:54:00 PM
I knew you would be top of the list with this one.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/24/2023 9:14:00 AM
Excellent wording. Beautiful!!
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Date: 10/24/2023 5:54:00 AM
Back with congratulations, Hiya!
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Date: 10/24/2023 3:11:00 AM
Ahh angelic star! Where do i begin praising your dodoitsu chain? I am in absolute awe of the way you’ve woven colours and flowers and gems into this very passionate poem that flows with love and romance in sheer eloquence! Ah every line speaks for me too and resonates strongly! This is definitely the epitome of love! The way you weave words is so very artistic! And i love “ you hue my wildflower heart” “honeyed hibiscus” “lavender soliloquy” “ pink muse” youve said so much here! So poetically!in
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Ink Empress
Date: 10/24/2023 3:12:00 AM
Such unique metaphors and descriptive imagery! That truly blew me away! Left me speechless and my heart full! Love this one! Thank you for writing! Congratulations on winning! Well deserved! Fave too for me
Date: 10/23/2023 4:49:00 PM
Just gorgeous writing, Hiya. I loved this!
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Date: 10/21/2023 10:20:00 PM
This is an exquisite write with the aroma of love and lovely flowers. I love the word choice and beautiful colors. Was this for contest? Surely you will place. Well done Hiya!
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Date: 10/21/2023 9:29:00 AM
Your poems are ever a joy to read. I feel as if I have entered a flower garden with hyacinths, hibiscus and daisies. You blend feelings and emotions with every flower.You have given a kick start to your amorous romantic poem with a stunning first stanza! " I gaze at those fireflies in your butter-sweet eyes that shine, succulent with white lush pulp of love's purity," You juggle with words and create magic, dear Hiya. Superb !
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Date: 10/21/2023 7:31:00 AM
as, rubies glazed with honeyed hibiscus and nectarine…Mon Cherie… swan-shaped twin flames…So much fun, color, imagery! Love it!
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Date: 10/21/2023 5:31:00 AM
you are a genius , Wizard of words , so deep and beautiful
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Date: 10/21/2023 3:06:00 AM
You wrote six.. well done.. I think I got bored after five.. I really dont like short form poetry... its not for me, but I thought I would support ink in her contest... all of your six are amazing.. full of imagery and great choice of words like, coral spirit, soft beige affection and butter sweet eyes... I think the empress will love this one and can see this in first place.. well done Hiya.. keep spreading your love and positivity..
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Date: 10/20/2023 7:52:00 PM
I enjoyed the spiritual reverence of the poem. It was very uplifting
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Date: 10/20/2023 7:51:00 PM
I enjoyed the spiritual reverence of the poem. It was very uplifting
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Date: 10/20/2023 3:41:00 PM
Very sweet romance!
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Date: 10/20/2023 3:36:00 PM
mon cherie, now we are talking the language of romance, love it !
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Date: 10/20/2023 2:23:00 PM
such a soft and eloquent love poem with so many outstanding lines. "Shimmering wine soul" was one of my favorite as was "daisies will be my pink muse." Your imagery is softly outstanding. Loved every word of it. Best wishes in the contest. Have a pleasant weekend, Sara
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Date: 10/20/2023 1:21:00 PM
I gaze at those fireflies in your butter-sweet eyes that shine, succulent with white lush pulp of love's purity---afterlife shall foretell our lavender soliloquy of celeste romance, whipped in soft beige affection--- a joy to read, as always, Hiya. Eloquence of your words paint your canvas brilliantly. A FAVE for this write oozing romance.
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Date: 10/20/2023 12:38:00 PM
Dear Hiya, your writing is like a breathtaking gem crafted from the depths of your imaginative mind and your soul overflowing with poetic richness. Reading your work brings immense pleasure and profound happiness. Your romantic Dodoitsu sets are a beautiful tapestry of vivid imagery and vibrant hues. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/20/2023 10:05:00 AM
Nature woman whose heart open wide to sublime beauty and flood of Love! Each stanza of this new form of poetry to me is a magic that tickles the senses of an avid reader of amazing poetry! A most stunning gem what you have carved from your vibrant imagination and your rich poetic soul.. dear Hiya, it is an immense delight and a deep joy to read you.. God bless your amazing beautiful soul. Best wishes and regards.
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/24/2023 8:33:00 AM
Oh my, these words of high praise and appreciation are so honouring~ I'm really humbled by your generous remarks about my poetry and I'm so glad to know that you enjoyed reading this poem.. This makes my heart so full! Extremely grateful for your kind visit and magical compliments dear beautiful soul, means a lot to me coming from a brilliant poetess like you :)
Date: 10/20/2023 9:56:00 AM
Wow! Great string of romantic Dodoitsu, so much imagery and color. Hiya. Good luck in the contest as I see a great winner. God bless
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/24/2023 7:28:00 AM
Thank you so much dear lovely Eve, I'm very glad to know that you like my dodoitsu poem, means a lot especially coming from such a stunning poetess like you~ sending love :)
Date: 10/20/2023 9:52:00 AM
Treasured gem stones and a wildflower heart… what could be better comparisons to romance and love? Fleur de amour, Hiya.
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/24/2023 7:27:00 AM
Thank you so much beautiful soul, I'm truly grateful for your wonderful visit & lovely compliments, your kind n sweet words are so heartwarming :)
Date: 10/20/2023 9:45:00 AM
Lovely as always. Beautifully done, God bless you sweet friend. Much love, Gina
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/24/2023 7:25:00 AM
Thank you so much beautiful Gina, I'm very grateful for your precious visit and feedbacks always, sending love :)

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