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The door is open; why are we knocking Does yet thought flow, foil our meditation Within cave of heart, love is beckoning Divine love outpouring is non-judging Embrace requiring no invitation The door is open; why are we knocking Feel, oh hermit, love throb scintillating No sooner we choose, path of cessation Within cave of heart, love is beckoning Petal by petal, feel our heart blooming Silently signalling our ascension The door is open; why are we knocking We are still, yet something within moving Ushering boundless bliss throb elation Within cave of heart, love is beckoning No doing need be done; we keep flowing Each heartbeat, a joyous celebration The door is open; why are we knocking Within cave of heart, love is beckoning 30-April-2021

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Date: 5/1/2021 1:18:00 AM
I must one day try this villanelle. Seems it's beyond me.
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Date: 5/1/2021 2:58:00 AM
Somewhat a mix of triolet and Terza Rima with tercets and repeating lines
Date: 4/30/2021 9:32:00 PM
Made-up mostly of everyday words, crafted effortlessly, US, I enjoyed its mood, Aloha!
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Date: 4/30/2021 9:45:00 PM
Happy you enjoyed, William!
Date: 4/30/2021 11:20:00 AM
You have done well with a pretty difficult form. US. Nice to read you today.
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Date: 4/30/2021 6:42:00 PM
Thanks, Daniel! Villanelle is a recently acquired romance!

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