Ceilings

(In all honesty, this was originally penned as a 5 second joke about meaningless poetry. Then I looked at it and quite liked it and realised it was actually just a short about the poetry I wrote yesterday. Found the idea interesting, so sharing) There is texture on the ceiling Mimicking my ruminating thoughts Mind and body contained within

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Paul Willason

Date: 4/21/2023 7:23:00 AM

Interesting....stirred memories of seeing shapes, faces, shadows play on the ceiling when I was a child...still vivid. There you go...nothing is ever meaningless.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 4/21/2023 7:52:00 AM

I'm not sure about that. I keep trying to write something about flowers and getting nowhere :)