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June- 18-2025
Light a Lanterne Poetry Contest
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ceasefire

cease gunshots need of hour embrace in love peace
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Williams Avatar
June 22, 2025 at 5:34 AM
Dear Valsa,your poem is a powerful and concise reflection, capturing the urgency of our times. The contrast between violence and the call for peace is striking. The simplicity of the words makes the message even more impactful—reminding us that love and peace are what we truly need in moments of chaos. Good luck in the contest ...Hugs
Empress Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 7:16 AM
I long to see a world that is peaceful and not filled with fears and hatred especially in some parts of the world as as we see today dear sweet valsa. This is such a heartfelt and impactful lanterne. In few words youve said something that would leave an impression. I hope you are doing well. I just got back on soup after a while. Thank you for supporting me and for being kind always. Sending you light always
DiMino Avatar
June 20, 2025 at 1:55 AM
If only...I hear you, Valsa. Blessings my friend. Two need to cease...or there will always be fire.
Buhagiar Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 1:55 AM
Cease fire! Something tells me it is just wishful thinking.
Maverick Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 11:34 PM
An hour of Gods time would suit me real Fine Valsa.' All the best in this worthy contest.'
Rodrigues Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 5:35 PM
If only! Can we! Hugs
Baker Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 5:17 PM
Cease the fire, cool the tempers, learn to let Love dictate our actions. I like your Lanterne, Valsa. Good luck in the contest! Your friend in Texas, Tex
Narain Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 9:19 AM
In this world, we need calm headed poets like you. Ceasefire is a good option tobe taught.
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