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The most innocent, under ceasefire, carry within their being the ability

to help all to relax. We breathe, within their lungs, the path to peace.

Light Up The Lanterne, Nette Onclaud, 6/17/2025

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child
listen
cooing doves
somnolent song
breathe

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Valsa George

Date: 6/22/2025 1:50:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your win dear Kim.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 6/21/2025 12:46:00 PM

Oh how the world needs a stopping of the miliatary ceasefire as well as media flares which said across the airwaves hourly. Thank you for highlighting the issue of the innocent who are thrown into the midst of war w/o thought.

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 6/21/2025 12:26:00 PM

Congratulations poet friend on your wi in this contest with a thoughtful write. I have not set my hands in this poetry form...Perhaps in the future. Wish you a peaceful weekend.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/21/2025 10:51:00 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful Lantern, Kim :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/21/2025 9:18:00 AM

You did fantastic. Congrats

Howard Kerr

Date: 6/21/2025 7:56:00 AM

Congratulations to you, Kim. Thanks for congratulating me. Howard

Beata Agustin

Date: 6/21/2025 6:03:00 AM

Congrats. Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 6/21/2025 4:04:00 AM

Congrats on your placement in this contest Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/21/2025 5:34:00 AM

Thank you, Oliver!

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 6/18/2025 5:50:00 PM

Wonderful use of ceasefire for the contest Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/19/2025 5:31:00 AM

Thank you, Oliver!

Valsa George

Date: 6/18/2025 4:43:00 AM

Beautiful, dear Kim. Children are not worried about war or its consequences.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/19/2025 5:31:00 AM

They are affected. How wonderful when they can exist in peace. God bless!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 6/17/2025 3:49:00 PM

children are indeed a soothing balm! Great contest contender! Best wishes, yellow rose

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/19/2025 5:32:00 AM

Thank you, YR!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/17/2025 1:56:00 PM

I like this one, Kim. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for sharing it with us. Way to go. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/17/2025 2:54:00 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/17/2025 10:38:00 AM

Peace we need it.' I pray for it.' Yet i am told it Only comes through war??? Dear Lord Zion is Not just a name tag.' Its a spritual state..( For flesh and blood will never inherit the Kingdom of God ) and we were & are abused.!!! Mentally if nothing else 2020/2025.) Lies upon lies.' Deception the only offering I see! Come Lord maybe I am not good enough.' Yet Your will be done gladly.'

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/17/2025 10:53:00 AM

Some do not want peace, sadly. God hears the cries of those who long for His return. The wicked will be destroyed. Those who love the Lord will get the peace they seek and nothing that we suffer here will be comparable to the blessings received.

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/17/2025 10:18:00 AM

Y e s , Kim we need to listen to their starving cries as well. Powerful entry ~ gl

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/17/2025 11:28:00 AM

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/17/2025 10:49:00 AM

Yes! A missionary had a story of a woman who would cry every night because her kids went to bed without food. They took her and her kids in and now they are fed.

Paige Hind

Date: 6/17/2025 8:55:00 AM

This is comforting to me. Very beautiful. Each line, so delicate

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/17/2025 10:04:00 AM

Thank you so much <3

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/17/2025 7:38:00 AM

- ...just relax ... great written, Kim :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/17/2025 8:54:00 AM

Thank you, sweet friend!