Cawing Crow

In the night movement there’s a wary crow Straight up into the blue moon it flies high Cocking its flight to avoid its cold rays Each night in the moon brings a large crow’s sigh Elbows of their feet bend throughout the air As the bird sings, a gorgeous sound to me I can sense its flight near me, overhead He’s flapping near to me, but I can’t see Only if the moon is shining greatly Can I see, tonight it comes in and out But sure when it comes out of the darkness The moon only brings shades that are about Circling there above me cawing with joy Listening do I hear his great power Appearing now within the little light Dips down on me as I stand and cower Conquering my fear I reach for him near I hope that he comes onto my dark arm He does just that, I look deep in his eyes He swallows my heartbeats without alarm Now I move to the nearest tree and caw Allowing him to fly to high branches Power envelopes me, I seem to float I must leave him to the highest reaches Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 1/13/2014 8:58:00 PM
You went the distance Russell, I'm going to re-read the epic poem all over again... Goodnight ..Linda
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Date: 1/13/2014 1:29:00 PM
Russell...You would make Poe proud! You are an amazing writer! Faves & Sevens, My best, chuck
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Date: 1/13/2014 8:32:00 AM
Mysterious verse filled with enigmatic expressions that lures the spirit into the depths of oneself where the light cannot reach unless the veil of fear is lifted! Great work!
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Date: 1/12/2014 6:59:00 PM
This poem just rings with possibilities Russell !!Proving that nature is awe inspiring as is the human spirit...Great poem! luv,Deb
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Date: 1/12/2014 6:26:00 PM
Well I wonder if this is metaphoric work where the crow represents someone..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for dropping by..Cacao Tree grows the cocoa bean from which chocolate comes..It is indigenous to Mexico and South America ...I did some research to write that one..Sara
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