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Caveman Atmosphere Re-Created with a Twist

Should a caveman or woman accidentally wander into our time zone, He or she would feel right at home, With their keen ear easily able to interpret our not-so-subtle Grunts, And groans. Their good eyesight and sense of smell soon aiding them in finding a free meal. On many a movie set. With a home invite from the director or producer on the cards. With real muscles and body strength dwarfing what we consider as Power, Suitable for the Frey. Able to leap from building to building with consummate ease, They would soon adapt to our concrete jungle, With their trusty club at hand, Making us quiver as we hide behind the nearest bar. Their fleetness of foot and turning speed able to, Test out some of our smaller cars. Their ability to deal to snakes in the grass an extra bonus. Who would benefit most from this accidental meeting? I think we would, as they would know where to find the best caves, To help us overcome the housing shortage.

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Date: 2/13/2018 5:22:00 PM
So very clever, David.
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David Smith
Date: 2/13/2018 10:31:00 PM
Very kind of you to say so. Sometimes I just sit down at the computer and surprise myself. Thanks for throwing some sunlight my way. Regards David in NZ

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