Caustic View

Fitting my eye
to the keyhole
I peak into 
the elegant room.
I have an amazing view.
Beyond the table still holding
the remains of last nights
gourmet Meal, with 
flecks of spilled pepper 
shining on the snowy linens.
To the rumpled bed,
it's fluffy pillow tossed,
unwanted onto the plush gray
of the floor.
The hands on the bedside 
clock sit still as it rests
there unwound. 
Finally a movement 
on the terrace attracts my eye
and I jerk away from the key hole
and scream. I must confide that I 
only wanted to peak at the beauty
from the orient. I never expected
My eye to discover the caustic  
view of her dainty neck noosed 
and her beautiful body 
twirling in the predawn Light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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October 21, 2008 at 6:51 AM
It's like reading a chapter of a novel....I want to hear more!!! Love the descriptions...awesome details!! ~ Nicely done!! ~ Love, Carrie
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