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Kaleidascope of color in the pines Morning sun rising golden, beams outward flow Revelation, intricate spider web design Spider works to anchor, damaged hole sew As the golden sun rises higher heat in tow Waterdroplets linger upon the leaves A bee looking for nectar breakfast caught The spider upon a strand creeps, bee leaves Waterdroplets slowly disappear until nought Bee is so thankful that he fought and wrought

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/30/2017 1:40:00 PM
So happy as bee escaped. I hate spider and am scared of that creature. Thanks Sara
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Date: 7/29/2017 7:28:00 PM
You are always so good at describing the intricacies of nature, Sara. Very nice. I do love my raw unfiltered honey!!
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Date: 7/29/2017 4:57:00 PM
Fav'd; I am allergic to bee stings and have had too many; still, I find bees adorable little buzzers and love their honey, which I'm not allergic to. Great pen!
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Date: 7/29/2017 12:06:00 PM
- It would be a "juicy" meal for a spider - A lovely poem, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/29/2017 3:36:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Always happy to read your poem my friend. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 7/28/2017 12:26:00 PM
Uplifting and well written.
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Date: 7/28/2017 9:04:00 AM
What a wonderful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading your humble poetry Sara, such magnificent writings this morning! You never cease to amaze me with your incredible work! Tremendous job!!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/28/2017 11:49:00 AM
Russell, I appreciate you dropping by..I have a contest going if you care to look and see if you want to enter it..Your comments are always appreciated...Sara
Date: 7/28/2017 8:51:00 AM
Well written Sara. I enjoyed this :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/28/2017 8:54:00 AM
Heidi,Thanks for the kind review..I appreciate the time spent reading and commenting on my work..Your presence here is uplifting..Sara

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