Notes About The Poem

Catwalk of Life

Two-hundred dollar hairdo
Cascading off her shoulders
Dressed in a little black dress
And Louboutin stilettos

Leaving behind a trailing cloud
Of extravagant luxurious perfume
Flaunting the tiera of a princess
Strutting down the catwalk of life

Walking five inches off the ground
This svelt slanky body devoid of carbs
Ruby red lipstick over a flashy smile
Crystals dangling from her ears

Bejeweled gems round her long bare neck
Glancing at you with her kohl-accented eyes
An exuberant smile exploding with the
Confidence of youthful carefree buoyancy



AP: 2nd place 2022, Honorable Mention 2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolf Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 10:35 PM
I'm the wrong gender for this one. LOL. Seriously, you've sure described those fashion scarecrows on those fashion runways to a 'T.' (As for me, I'll take a furry little kitten advancing down one, any day. Oh, well, I'm just an accident of birth, I guess). Nicely done, Line! :) gw
Gauthier Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 11:10 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Gershon. I love kittens better too. LOL
Marc Avatar
February 12, 2019 at 3:48 PM
Beautiful poem Line ~ a striking description :)
Gauthier Avatar
February 12, 2019 at 6:55 PM
Thanks, PM. Much appreciated.
Kiser Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 4:43 PM
Another smoothly moving poem; you describe her so well I can see her strutting down that catwalk.
Gauthier Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 4:46 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and compliment, ML.
Mcferran Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 12:26 PM
Exquisitely penned!! ;)
Gauthier Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 2:11 PM
Thank you so much, Rhona. Much appreciated.
Krutsinger Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 12:02 PM
The self confidence of the person in this poem overwhelms me, and makes me smile. "Strutting down the catwalk of life Walking five inches off the ground" - magical, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 12:03 PM
Thanks, Caren. Appreciate your visit and comment.
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