Nette Onclaud Poet Pleiades

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Caterpillar--Pleiades

Crisp the leaf she nibbles

Coiling in yellow dress,

Cocooned…waiting to bloom.

Close to freedom, nights pass

Cuddling her lustruos threads…

Chrysalis, queen of frills 

Changed as a butterfly!



11/22/2015
Pleiades, Please for Kim Merryman
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Teddy Kimathi December 1, 2015 at 6:54 AM A beautiful picture of a metamorphosis! Your verse created a film in my mind... Congrats for your WIN in the contest nette! ;-)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 30, 2015 at 3:17 AM Congrats nette.. very wonderful write n win!

Sandra Haight November 29, 2015 at 8:30 AM Amazing Pleiades, Nette, and filled with great imagery. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Eve Roper November 28, 2015 at 4:14 PM Good write, Nette, and congratulations on your win!

Skat A November 28, 2015 at 3:26 PM Nette, Congrats on your fine win, SKAT LOVE

Lin Lane November 28, 2015 at 7:20 AM Well done, Nette... congratulations.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores November 28, 2015 at 5:20 AM Congratulations Nette

Connie Marcum Wong November 27, 2015 at 6:27 PM A beautiful piece and wonderful win! Congratulations!

Abdul Malik Mandani November 27, 2015 at 5:01 PM Very nice.

Jan Allison November 27, 2015 at 4:59 PM Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman November 27, 2015 at 3:29 PM Nette, I loved the descriptiveness on this and how the lines flowed together so well! Congrats on your win and for learning a new poetry form! Love, Kim

Paul Callus November 26, 2015 at 1:46 PM You tackled a unique topic and produced a delightful Pleiades, Nette! This should now transform into a lovely win:) Hugs // paul

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 24, 2015 at 1:55 AM Wonderful, Nette...I love butterflies! Hugs, Rhonda

Matthew Anish November 23, 2015 at 9:24 PM Recently sold an article about Butterflies. You paint a nice word portrait of this incredible animal. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Sara Kendrick November 23, 2015 at 2:56 PM Ahh!!!..Good one for the contest..Those caterpillars surely do have voracious appetites..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Duke Beaufort November 22, 2015 at 12:34 PM Nette, just an example of a great natural transformation that is an incredible show. I c what you have done. Homage paid to the lovely seven sisters in the heavens.

Jan Allison November 22, 2015 at 10:58 AM Absolutely beautiful Nette such a clever poem good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Gabby Sabre November 22, 2015 at 10:54 AM Visually perfect, reaches out to fly into my screen and beyond your poetry of life and nature!

Richard Lamoureux November 22, 2015 at 9:26 AM What a natural beauty!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 22, 2015 at 7:35 AM - Natural beauty, is a great poem Nette !!! - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Norma Arana November 22, 2015 at 7:19 AM Your unique topic, your mood created quite a lovely emotion in me. Fluent words glide from a poet master like you!

Jill Spagnola November 22, 2015 at 7:08 AM This is awesome Nette! If I had read it first I would not have entered mine!!Solid 7...:), jill

Tim Smith November 22, 2015 at 6:39 AM Wow nette...love this one

CayCay Godwin November 22, 2015 at 6:38 AM Awesome - I haven't read about the contest, but the poem is already a winner to me ... CayCay