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Caterpillar

Gracefully she wobbles up the tree with wild ambitions nobody understands. Still she carries on relentless and holds her head up high. the caterpillar's fuzzy dream to be a ballerina AP: 1st place 2020 Posted on April 10, 2020

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/11/2020 11:19:00 PM

Ha ha! Such a nice surprise of a poem! So enjoyed! ~ Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/12/2020 5:56:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon. Most appreciated.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/11/2020 1:20:00 PM

what a gorgeous haibun Line, I especially love the haiku ending:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/11/2020 1:32:00 PM

Thank, Jan. Most appreciated.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 4/10/2020 11:52:00 PM

Whether she dream it or not, she will definitely be one.. Lovely Haibun Line...

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/11/2020 1:32:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely comment, Jenish.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 4/10/2020 10:45:00 PM

Line, Poem's promise made to a hopeful ballerina. A ballerina that spins a cocoon in dreams. -Richard

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/10/2020 11:07:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated comment, Richard.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 4/10/2020 9:04:00 PM

and what a wonderful ballerina she will be

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/10/2020 10:11:00 PM

Absolutely. Thanks, Timothy.

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/10/2020 4:45:00 PM

Soon to be a beautiful butterfly...Nice one

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/10/2020 10:12:00 PM

Thanks, Arturo. Our little caterpillar may get over her disappointment after all. LOL

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/10/2020 2:15:00 PM

ha! i love the first 2 lines and then the ending totally took me by surprise, but in a delightful way, line...

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/10/2020 10:12:00 PM

Thank you so much, Ilene.