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Cat Eyed

white wind pushing clouds blueberry birds dotting sky twinkle in cats eye

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/30/2023 6:22:00 AM

Good one. Way to go in writing it. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Karen Jones
Date: 9/30/2023 6:25:00 AM

Thanks and you are welcome Sara!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 9/29/2023 6:06:00 PM

Beautiful and familiar because I have a twinkling eyed cat. I enjoyed this poem.

Karen Jones
Date: 9/29/2023 6:08:00 PM

Really? What kind of cat? Thanks for reading.

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/29/2023 6:05:00 PM

Karen, Your haiku is filled with stunning visuals, painted beautifully with your choice of words.

Karen Jones
Date: 9/29/2023 6:07:00 PM

Honored you liked it Sotto Poet.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2023 9:39:00 AM

Really pretty images. Did you mean dotting the sky?

Karen Jones
Date: 9/29/2023 12:59:00 PM

Yes! Oh my spell check didn't warn me. Thanks will fix it.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/29/2023 8:21:00 AM

Impeccable imagery and a great haiku.

Karen Jones
Date: 9/29/2023 8:33:00 AM

Victor thank you for your gracious comment!

Karen Croft

Date: 9/29/2023 8:07:00 AM

Very nice haiku They are my favourites to write

Karen Jones
Date: 9/29/2023 8:32:00 AM

Really? I like them but struggle with them. So thanks Karen!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/29/2023 4:12:00 AM

such a soft write...I love 'white wind' and how you ended the poem with the cat eyeing the blueberry birds. I live it and am faving it. Enjoy your day, Sara

Karen Jones
Date: 9/29/2023 4:44:00 AM

Honored you fav and I admit to trying Haiku because of you. Hugs for being an inspiration.