Cat Eyed

white wind pushing clouds
blueberry birds dotting sky
twinkle in cats eye
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 6:22 AM
Good one. Way to go in writing it. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Jones Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 6:25 AM
Thanks and you are welcome Sara!
Greenhough Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 6:06 PM
Beautiful and familiar because I have a twinkling eyed cat. I enjoyed this poem.
Jones Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 6:08 PM
Really? What kind of cat? Thanks for reading.
Poet Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 6:05 PM
Karen, Your haiku is filled with stunning visuals, painted beautifully with your choice of words.
Jones Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 6:07 PM
Honored you liked it Sotto Poet.
Dietrich Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 9:39 AM
Really pretty images. Did you mean dotting the sky?
Jones Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 12:59 PM
Yes! Oh my spell check didn't warn me. Thanks will fix it.
Buhagiar Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 8:21 AM
Impeccable imagery and a great haiku.
Jones Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 8:33 AM
Victor thank you for your gracious comment!
Croft Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 8:07 AM
Very nice haiku They are my favourites to write
Jones Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 8:32 AM
Really? I like them but struggle with them. So thanks Karen!
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