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The pre-dawn rang as cat choirs sang in waring gangs sharp and rank before they sprang with claw and fang. Isn’t it an overweening piety to think that diverse cat societies would address conflicts more politely observe more cultural propriety and politic more peacefully and quietly than our own species, which behaves violently Are we not, in part, their masters? Don’t we war for goals we’re after? Aren’t some of our leaders practically gangsters? Does any species author more disasters? Humans are - frankly - alpha-predator bastards. If the language of cats, we could unscramble, and into their feral dialogs we could wrangle, perhaps we’d see that they’re just following our example.

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Date: 2/29/2024 8:04:00 AM
Dear Anais, Your poem is a thought-provoking reflection on the parallels between human and feline behavior, cleverly woven with wit and insight. Your words challenge us to reconsider our societal norms and assumptions about human nature. The comparison between cat societies and our own prompts introspection about our role as stewards of the planet. This illuminating piece encourages us to contemplate our impact on the world. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 2/29/2024 6:51:00 PM
Wonderful review - thank you =]

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