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cat astrophes

The pre-dawn rang
as cat choirs sang
in waring gangs
sharp and rank
before they sprang
with claw and fang.

Isn’t it an overweening piety
to think that diverse cat societies
would address conflicts more politely
observe more cultural propriety
and politic more peacefully and quietly
than our own species, which behaves violently

Are we not, in part, their masters?
Don’t we war for goals we’re after?
Aren’t some of our leaders practically gangsters?

Does any species author more disasters?
Humans are - frankly - alpha-predator bastards.

If the language of cats, we could unscramble,
and into their feral dialogs we could wrangle,
perhaps we’d see that they’re just following our example.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rodgers Avatar
February 29, 2024 at 8:04 AM
Dear Anais, Your poem is a thought-provoking reflection on the parallels between human and feline behavior, cleverly woven with wit and insight. Your words challenge us to reconsider our societal norms and assumptions about human nature. The comparison between cat societies and our own prompts introspection about our role as stewards of the planet. This illuminating piece encourages us to contemplate our impact on the world. - Blessings, Daniel
Vionet Avatar
February 29, 2024 at 6:51 PM
Wonderful review - thank you =]
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