Castles

I sealed my mind with sellotape 
I’m in a cardboard castle
I wander through the flimsy rooms
Within this fragile parcel

A false sense of security 
That this is my protection
A cardboard place in which to hide 
Avoiding all reflection

No shadows play upon these walls 
To cause my mind confusion
No shafts of light to cheat me here
Or disrupt my illusion   

Yet still within I cannot settle 
Finding no solace or peace
This place built for sanctuary 
Offers no release

No warriors come challenging
No contenders to face
I only fight one battle
The being in this place

You cannot build a castle
With paper chains and leather
And wonder what the secret is 
And how it holds together

Without my thoughts to light my mind
The edges break and fray
Without a path to take me on 
The corridors are grey

I thought I’d build a castle
To block you from my view 
How could I know the truth of it?
I built it out of you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Inman Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 10:03 AM
Excellent last stanza.
Warlov Avatar
October 2, 2016 at 9:15 AM
Identity- Handle with care. ··· "Let there be spaces in your togetherness." - Khalil Gibran
Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 11:14 PM
Very good poem, Ms. Hand. Excellent ending. Very thoughtful w/good self-awareness and introspection. An enjoyable poem to muse. I hope to read more from you. Love and peace
Molloy Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 11:46 AM
enjoyed your poem too. easy, serious and lyrical :)
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October 1, 2016 at 11:04 AM
Enjoyed reading Sarah. Linda
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