Castles

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QUOTE: "And so castles made of sand, slip into the sea, eventually." by Jimi Hendrix. As the queen of all your castles, I couldn't love you more. Prove me wrong.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/15/2025 11:50:00 AM

Great quote…whereas the castle of sand slips into the sea, this protagonist will claim all castles as her own, as she runs the home and rules the heart of the King.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 5/16/2025 6:02:00 AM

Your insight into my tiny poem is refreshing Kim. Thank you for taking the time to comment. Best wishes from Wen.