Castles

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QUOTE: "And so castles made of sand, slip into the sea, eventually." by Jimi Hendrix. As the queen of all your castles, I couldn't love you more. Prove me wrong.

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I Am Anaya

Date: 5/29/2025 10:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, dear Wen! A woman's home is her castle she is the heart and soul, the king is fortunate to accompany his queen's regal essence. Good song too~

Speaks Volumes
Date: 5/29/2025 12:02:00 PM

Thanx Anaya, it doesn't hold a candle to your chess game. Yours is priceless.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2025 6:39:00 AM

Good one for that question at the end!! Congrats in the contest

Speaks Volumes
Date: 5/29/2025 11:59:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, I based it on those 3 words.. Prove me wrong. She says she couldn't love him more, To prove her wrong he will have to prove he is even more lovable.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/15/2025 11:50:00 AM

Great quote…whereas the castle of sand slips into the sea, this protagonist will claim all castles as her own, as she runs the home and rules the heart of the King.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 5/16/2025 6:02:00 AM

Your insight into my tiny poem is refreshing Kim. Thank you for taking the time to comment. Best wishes from Wen.