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Castles

Old castles are for me, I can be your lady and you my loving king.

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Sotto Poet

Date: 5/29/2025 2:54:00 PM

Back with hearty congratulations on your well-deserved contest win, Paula, really well deserved

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/30/2025 10:06:00 AM

Thanks for coming Back to read and write again. Also for your hearty Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "Castles" write again. Great to see you here. Hope you are having a great day. Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/29/2025 11:15:00 AM

- Back with congratulations on your winning poem, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/29/2025 11:57:00 AM

Thanks for coming Back to read, write and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "Castles" write again. Always wonderful to see you here. Hope you are having a great day. Hugs... Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/29/2025 10:59:00 AM

"3 Place" Castles ~ Date Written:5/13/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet.........

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 5/29/2025 8:08:00 AM

Congratulations dear poetess on your win in this contest with a nice take on the prompt. Wish you a pleasant day.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/29/2025 11:07:00 AM

Thanks for coming to read, write and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "Castles" write. I love to watch them on TV and read books about them. Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2025 6:38:00 AM

back with my congrats. I thought yours was so cute

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/29/2025 11:04:00 AM

Thanks for coming back again to read, write and for your Congratulations. Always great to see you here. Glad you found my "Castles" to be, cute. Castles are fun to see on TV and in books. Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

Ink Empress

Date: 5/29/2025 3:30:00 AM

Awwn how cute dear paula, so sweet! I have a thing for old castles too! They are stunning! Thank you for sharing! Congrats on your win: sending you light always

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/29/2025 11:03:00 AM

Thanks for coming to read, write and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my "Castles" to be, cute - so sweet. Castles are fun to see on TV and in books. I would love to live in one. Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

JCB Brul

Date: 5/18/2025 12:52:00 AM

I love this short poem..We used to build sandcastles when were kids and pretended to be Kings and Queens. Stay sweet dear Paula.^___^ JCB

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/18/2025 1:22:00 PM

Thanks for coming to read and write. Glad you love my short poem "Castles." Oh yes, building sandcastles was always so much fun as a kid on the beach. I love to see the old castles on TV or in books. Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/17/2025 2:54:00 PM

I love to visit old castles too, makes me wonder about those that lives through those walls before, thanks for the verse dear Paula, stay well :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/18/2025 1:19:00 PM

Thanks for coming to read and write. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Castles" write. If the old walls could talk, what would they say??? I love to see them on TV and in books. Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/17/2025 2:52:00 PM

So sweet and tender, Paula. Blessings to you.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/18/2025 1:17:00 PM

Thanks for coming to read and write. Glad you found my "Castles" to be, So sweet and tender. Castles are fun to see on TV and in books. Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

Len Gasun

Date: 5/17/2025 9:48:00 AM

Sweet and romantic verse my dear poet friend Paula. I'm sure your loving king is on his way to you, his gorgeous and amazing poetic queen. Thanks a lot for sharing. I love it and enjoyed. Best wishes always my dear. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/17/2025 10:35:00 AM

Thanks for coming to read, write and for your Best wishes. Glad you loved and enjoyed reading my "Castles" write. Hugs... Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

Daniel Caplin

Date: 5/16/2025 11:38:00 PM

Dearest Paula, I love old castles and I am surrounded by them where I live, but equally an old castle could be your home and the king your loving husband and you of course the lady, a lovely thought, that I enjoyed reading this Saturday morning. Danny

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/17/2025 9:20:00 AM

Thanks for coming to read and write. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Castles" write. WOW!!! So you are surrounded by castles. You are so lucky. I only get to see them on TV and in books. Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/16/2025 2:40:00 PM

ohh this is what castles are built for --- the pomp and glory of royalty all dressed in the name of love....a covert way of expressing tales of romance , paula....charming!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/17/2025 8:31:00 AM

Thanks for coming to read and write. Glad you found my "Castles" to be, charming. I love old castles and the clothes they had. It is fun to see them on TV. Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/15/2025 2:48:00 PM

How drafty is your castle? Because if it isn't overly cold and we can dress for a certain era, explore beautiful, stately grounds and ride horses, I'll be the King and play castle with you! Oh, plumbing ... don't like that part. BUT the clothes - your lines brought my little girl out and it felt sooooo good. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/16/2025 1:50:00 PM

Thanks for coming to read and write. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Castles" write. Summer is coming so the castle will be warm. Dressing up will be great fun. Maybe the boy down the street will be our king. Plumbing is no problem. They are putting it in now. Hahaha!!! Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/15/2025 11:53:00 AM

Dear Paula, What a lovely love poem that says so much with so few words. I adore it! A Fav! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/16/2025 1:44:00 PM

Thanks for coming to read and write. Glad you found my "Castles" to be, a lovely love poem that says so much with so few words. I see FAV??? Thanks, you made my day. Sometimes few words can really say more and guess I did it here. Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/14/2025 10:12:00 PM

This poem's so romantic and lovely, it made me sigh. Good luck in the contest. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/15/2025 10:50:00 AM

Thanks for coming to read, write and for your Good luck in the contest. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Castles" write and found it to be, so romantic and lovely. It also made me sigh. Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/14/2025 9:06:00 PM

Loved your micro poem. Very much to the point. Best for a win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/15/2025 10:46:00 AM

Thanks for coming to read, write and for your kind words. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Castles" write. Every lady needs a loving king. Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/14/2025 3:06:00 PM

You are a romantic poetess, Paula. ~ Bol!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/15/2025 10:44:00 AM

Thanks for coming to read and write. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Castles" write. Yes, I love "Love and Flowers." Every lady needs a loving king. Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 5/14/2025 2:15:00 PM

Wonderful write Paula. Love the relationship here

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/15/2025 10:41:00 AM

Thanks for coming to read and write. Glad you found my "Castles" to be a, Wonderful write. I enjoyed writing about love in this short one. Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/14/2025 1:08:00 PM

Oh, so cute. I can visualize this.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/14/2025 1:31:00 PM

Thanks for coming to read and write. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Castles" write and found it to be, Oh, so cute. I had fun to writing this one. Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/14/2025 11:31:00 AM

- Sounds like the old days... lovely written, Paula :) - (I did mine today) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/14/2025 11:48:00 AM

Thanks for coming to read, write and for your Best wishes in the contest. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Castles" and found it to be, lovely written. Love the good old days. Hugs... Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

Paige Hind

Date: 5/14/2025 9:21:00 AM

Aw, this is lovely- <3

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/14/2025 10:46:00 AM

Thanks for coming to read and write. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Castles" write and found it to be, lovely. I loved writing this one. Enjoy loving words as you write away........

Anne Winter

Date: 5/13/2025 6:52:00 PM

Dear Paula, this made me smile, well composed. Best, Anne

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/14/2025 10:44:00 AM

Thanks for coming to read, write and you your Best. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Castles" write and found it to be, well composed. Also glad this one made you smile. I love to give out smiles. Give a smile away for they are free. Enjoy loving words as you write away........

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 5/13/2025 6:31:00 PM

Fun, a bit romantic too! So cute Paula :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/14/2025 10:41:00 AM

Thanks for coming to read and write. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Castles" write and found it to be, Fun, a bit romantic and So cute. It is short but was so much fun to write. Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/13/2025 4:16:00 PM

Cute double liner!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/14/2025 10:38:00 AM

Thanks for coming to read and write. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Castles" write and found it to be a, Cute double liner. I had fun to writing this one. Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2025 4:12:00 PM

Ahhh so sweet, Paula. This is such a fun and easy contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/14/2025 9:46:00 AM

Thanks for coming to read and write. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Castles" write and found it to be, so sweet. It was fun to write. Enjoy loving words as you write away.........