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Castles

Old castles are for me, I can be your lady and you my loving king.

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/15/2025 2:48:00 PM

How drafty is your castle? Because if it isn't overly cold and we can dress for a certain era, explore beautiful, stately grounds and ride horses, I'll be the King and play castle with you! Oh, plumbing ... don't like that part. BUT the clothes - your lines brought my little girl out and it felt sooooo good. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/15/2025 11:53:00 AM

Dear Paula, What a lovely love poem that says so much with so few words. I adore it! A Fav! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/14/2025 10:12:00 PM

This poem's so romantic and lovely, it made me sigh. Good luck in the contest. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/15/2025 10:50:00 AM

Thanks for coming to read, write and for your Good luck in the contest. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Castles" write and found it to be, so romantic and lovely. It also made me sigh. Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/14/2025 9:06:00 PM

Loved your micro poem. Very much to the point. Best for a win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/15/2025 10:46:00 AM

Thanks for coming to read, write and for your kind words. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Castles" write. Every lady needs a loving king. Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/14/2025 3:06:00 PM

You are a romantic poetess, Paula. ~ Bol!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/15/2025 10:44:00 AM

Thanks for coming to read and write. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Castles" write. Yes, I love "Love and Flowers." Every lady needs a loving king. Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 5/14/2025 2:15:00 PM

Wonderful write Paula. Love the relationship here

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/15/2025 10:41:00 AM

Thanks for coming to read and write. Glad you found my "Castles" to be a, Wonderful write. I enjoyed writing about love in this short one. Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/14/2025 1:08:00 PM

Oh, so cute. I can visualize this.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/14/2025 1:31:00 PM

Thanks for coming to read and write. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Castles" write and found it to be, Oh, so cute. I had fun to writing this one. Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/14/2025 11:31:00 AM

- Sounds like the old days... lovely written, Paula :) - (I did mine today) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/14/2025 11:48:00 AM

Thanks for coming to read, write and for your Best wishes in the contest. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Castles" and found it to be, lovely written. Love the good old days. Hugs... Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

Paige Hind

Date: 5/14/2025 9:21:00 AM

Aw, this is lovely- <3

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/14/2025 10:46:00 AM

Thanks for coming to read and write. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Castles" write and found it to be, lovely. I loved writing this one. Enjoy loving words as you write away........

Anne Winter

Date: 5/13/2025 6:52:00 PM

Dear Paula, this made me smile, well composed. Best, Anne

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/14/2025 10:44:00 AM

Thanks for coming to read, write and you your Best. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Castles" write and found it to be, well composed. Also glad this one made you smile. I love to give out smiles. Give a smile away for they are free. Enjoy loving words as you write away........

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 5/13/2025 6:31:00 PM

Fun, a bit romantic too! So cute Paula :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/14/2025 10:41:00 AM

Thanks for coming to read and write. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Castles" write and found it to be, Fun, a bit romantic and So cute. It is short but was so much fun to write. Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/13/2025 4:16:00 PM

Cute double liner!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/14/2025 10:38:00 AM

Thanks for coming to read and write. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Castles" write and found it to be a, Cute double liner. I had fun to writing this one. Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2025 4:12:00 PM

Ahhh so sweet, Paula. This is such a fun and easy contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/14/2025 9:46:00 AM

Thanks for coming to read and write. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Castles" write and found it to be, so sweet. It was fun to write. Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/13/2025 3:29:00 PM

Yeah, why not? That's a good proposal, Darlene. Well composed, good luck with the contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/14/2025 9:44:00 AM

Thanks for coming to read, write and you your good luck with the contest. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Castles" write. I loved writing this one. Enjoy loving words as you write away.........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/13/2025 2:45:00 PM

Castles ~ Date Written:5/13/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet.........