Casting My Fly

My fly cast got caught on my fly.
The hook hurt so bad I did cry.
   While now in much pain
   it started to rain.
What more could go wrong, my oh my?

My fly cast was still on my fly.
The zipper went zap on the sly!
   It swished me around.
   I fell to the ground.
But amazingly I was still dry!

The boat sunk so now I got wet.
Much like getting deeper in dept.
   It took little glue,
   to fix this boo boo.
But I haven't seen daylight yet!


For John Freeman's "Limerick's about Fishing" contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/29/2011 11:52:00 AM
Wild and funny
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Date: 5/14/2011 8:03:00 AM
Many congratulations Jimmy on your win in John's fine Fisherman Limerick contest....:)
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Date: 5/9/2011 10:23:00 PM
Congratulations in this contest, Jimmy.
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Date: 5/9/2011 6:11:00 PM
Congrats to you on this humorous write in the contes Jimmy
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Date: 5/9/2011 9:45:00 AM
Congrats Jimmy on your win. A very funny write indeed..gautami
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Date: 5/9/2011 8:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jimmy in John's Fishing contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/8/2011 6:21:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John Freeman, Jimmy
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Date: 5/7/2011 9:59:00 PM
Copngratulations, Jimmy Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/7/2011 8:18:00 PM
Jimmy, great to see your poem one among the winner's circle. Congratulations on your poem's success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/7/2011 2:57:00 PM
Witty limerick, Jimmy. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/5/2011 11:58:00 PM
this is very funny ..gave me a good chuckle!Love,Deb
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