Cast Your Spell

Old crone, please tell me your secret. Give a taste of your magical brew. Whisper the herbs I must gather. To mix up your potency stew. A mere mortal born, I am helpless, Unless you will lend me some power. What ever it is I will drink it, No matter how sweet or how sour. “Close the book , ring the bell, light the candle”. If that’s what we’re needing to do. You can trust that I won’t tell your secret, And I need just but one hour or two. Long enough just to make up a potion That will cure a loved one I hold dear. For I have been told he is dying And perhaps will not out live the year. We’ve tried all the doctor’s prescriptions. They are useless against his disease. “Close the book, ring the bell, light the candle” And with pity, take heed to my pleas. By: Joyce Johnson For Linda Marie’s “Bell, Book and Candle.”Won a 3rd place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Davis Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 9:51 PM
Joyce This is such a beautifully written and heartfelt poem. I could feel your emotional turmoil and sadness. Thank you for the nice comment on my Poetry poem.
Brown Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 7:46 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Bell, Book, and Candle" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 9:50 PM
oh, Joyce, I know how sad you were when writing this and still trying to be hopeful. This poem is so good because it was heartfelt as well as being a winning poem. Congrats on your win. Luv, Andrea
Foster Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 8:26 PM
Congratulation Joyce. A great write, well done... Margaret
Freeman Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 6:12 PM
Beautiful write Joyce worthy of its honored place. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 5:42 PM
Congrats Joyce on your sweet success in my contest with this dazzling delight..luv..
Effendi Avatar
September 23, 2011 at 3:04 AM
Wonderful work, Joyce. It surely must have required such mastery of words to fit in the mandatory phrase “Close the book, ring the bell, light the candle” into your poetry and you made it look so graceful and effortless! Poetic.
Macmillan Avatar
September 22, 2011 at 3:27 PM
Nicely done, Joyce! Hope it does well in the contest. I took mine in a different direction, inspired by the Crucibles (Miller). I think its because I kept seeing book, bell and candle as bible, church bells and lighting the Christ candle. Couldn't shake the images so went with them. Always enjoy your poetry and looking forward to catching up with reading more, soon. Cheers, hugs and all, Cyndi.
Horne Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 5:21 PM
Wow, I just love this one, Joyce - and who wouldn't beg the old crone for help! I wanted to thank you for your comments on my blog - and to send you congrats for your wins, of course! This beauty will surely be a big winner
Lane Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 9:35 AM
Great work Joyce. I enjoyed reading it. Tony
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 1:03 AM
Joyce, yes, that is YOUR fondest wish and I hope it comes true. Love how you incorporated it into this challenging contest of Linda's!
Smith Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 12:56 AM
Might her 'magical brew' be a poetry stew? Spooky great poem.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace